If I am allowedwere to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries.

The first is the mostFirst, I would love to go to very developed countries likesuch as America, England and Germany.

The sSecond is, to the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia,

France, and Switzerland.

You don't need a new line here, since you're continuing a list :)

The third isird, I would love to travel to the most civilized countries, likesuch as Finland, Japan, and

iIt's said that nearly all developed countries almost allhave adopted the Ccapitalist system, but I have never seen it in the fieldcapitalism in real life and I am so curious about it.

Civilization is a presentation of citizens' comprehensive qualities, and that's what we human beings are supposed to pursue.

Not sure what you are trying to say here.

As for beauty, I think everybody likes it andbeauty. I especially worshipappreciate natureal beauty.

To say that you "worship" beauty sounds a little strange, you would use "worship" when talking in religious contexts.

In my opinion, there is nothing that can beat downdefeat nature.

I hope I can realize these hopemy dreams and I am sure that no matter how developed, civilized and beautiful those countries are,

China is not any worse than those countries and. I love China the most because it is my mother country.

Anyway, you only live once, b. Be yourself, and do things that you like as muchoften as you can.

If I amwere allowed to go abroad, I would like to go to the following types of countries.

The first isare the most developed countries like America, England and Germany.

"is" = singular
"are" = plural (America, England, Germany)

The second isare the most beautiful countries, like New Zealand, Australia,

The third isare the most civilized countries, like Finland, Japan and

Singapore, etc.

Do not use "etc." together with "and". In a list, "and" should always go before the final item.

iIt's said almost all developed countries almost allhave adopted the Ccapitalist system, but I have never seen it in the field and I am so curious about it.

As for beauty, I think everybody likes it and I especially worship natureal beauty.

China is not any worse than those countries and I love China the most because it is my mother country.

The sentence is grammatically correct as-is, but it is wordy and so I eliminated some repetition.