May 8, 2020
Yoga
Today, I did yoga after a long time. Some postures made my leg hurt and humble but it was fun. Every time i do Yoga, it makes me calm down and clear my mind. There are many advantages of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it everyday. I want to make a habit of doing yoga everyday.
오늘 나는 오랜만에 요가를 했다. 몇몇 자세들이 내 다리를 아프게하고 후들거리게 했지만 재미있었다. 매번 요가를 할 때마다 요가는 나를 진정시키고 정신을 맑게 해준다. 요가의 장점은 많지만 매일 하는 것은 어렵다. 나는 요가를 매일 하는 습관을 들이고 싶다.
Some postures made my legs hurt and humble but it was fun.
"Humble" does not make sense in this context.
Every time iI do Yoga, it makes me calms me down and clears my mind.
There are many advantages of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it every day.
I want to make a habit of doing yoga every day.
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Well done!
Yoga
Today, I did yoga after a long timegain for the first time in ages.
What you wrote was correct but didn't sound very natural. In place of "in ages" you could put a specific time period.
Some postures made my leg hurts ache and hutremble but it was fun.
I think you mean "tremble" instead of "humble."
I can say "Some postures made my legs hurt." But once I add the word tremble, it sounds a little more natural to say "ache" even though "ache" and "hurt" mean the same thing in this context. I'm not sure why. (I am learning now little I know about my own language, lol!)
Every time iI do Yoga, it makes me calm down and clear my mind.
There are many advantages of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it every day.
"Everyday" is an adjective, "every day" is a noun phrase. By the way, native speakers make this mistake alllll the time!
I want to make a habit of doing yoga every day.
Well done, my corrections were very minor!
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Today, I did yoga after a long timfor the first time in a while.
Your sentence could be corrected to "Today, I did yoga after a long time of not doing it", but it's more natural to say "for the first time in a while".
Some postures made my leg hurt and hutremble, but it was fun.
In English, we typically call them "yoga poses".
"humble" means someone who is modest, or someone who doesn't like to brag about their abilities.
"tremble" is when something shakes (like if your leg gets tired)
Every time i do Yoga, it makes me calms me down and clears my mind.
Your first sentence is ok, but the phrase "makes me calm down..." is slightly more forceful, while "it calms me down" is a more peaceful way to say it.
There are many advantagebenefits of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it everyday.
"advantages" is usually used in comparisons. For example: "There are many advantages of doing yoga rather than watching TV". Since there's no comparison though, it's slightly better to use "benefits", since it just means that yoga is good.
I want to make a habit of doing yoga everyday.
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Well done! Your entry reads very well, and most of the corrections I made are very minor.
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Today, I did yoga after a long time. Today, I did yoga Your sentence could be corrected to "Today, I did yoga after a long time of not doing it", but it's more natural to say "for the first time in a while". Today, I did yoga a What you wrote was correct but didn't sound very natural. In place of "in ages" you could put a specific time period. |
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Some postures made my leg hurt and humble but it was fun. Some pos In English, we typically call them "yoga poses". "humble" means someone who is modest, or someone who doesn't like to brag about their abilities. "tremble" is when something shakes (like if your leg gets tired) Some postures made my leg I think you mean "tremble" instead of "humble." I can say "Some postures made my legs hurt." But once I add the word tremble, it sounds a little more natural to say "ache" even though "ache" and "hurt" mean the same thing in this context. I'm not sure why. (I am learning now little I know about my own language, lol!) Some postures made my legs hurt "Humble" does not make sense in this context. |
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Every time i do Yoga, it makes me calm down and clear my mind. Every time i do Yoga, it Your first sentence is ok, but the phrase "makes me calm down..." is slightly more forceful, while "it calms me down" is a more peaceful way to say it. Every time Every time |
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There are many advantages of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it everyday. There are many "advantages" is usually used in comparisons. For example: "There are many advantages of doing yoga rather than watching TV". Since there's no comparison though, it's slightly better to use "benefits", since it just means that yoga is good. There are many advantages of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it every day. "Everyday" is an adjective, "every day" is a noun phrase. By the way, native speakers make this mistake alllll the time! There are many advantages of yoga but it’s hard to keep doing it every day. |
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I want to make a habit of doing yoga everyday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I want to make a habit of doing yoga every day. Well done, my corrections were very minor! I want to make a habit of doing yoga every day. |
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