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moumounorinori

Jan. 29, 2024

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We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious
The ice cream was on my friend.

That day was too hot so we got thirsty and then, we bought a iced coffee.

My Australian fried bought same coffee. Shop staff gave us paper straw. However when she (my Australian friend)drank it she didn't use a paper straw.

She said " I don't want to use paper straw because paper straw is made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals"

I'm not sure if it's true.


オーストラリア旅行の続きです。

フェリー乗り場でアイスクリームを食べました。友達が奢ってくれました。

その日はとても暑かったので喉が渇きました。アイスコーヒーを買いました。

店員が紙のストローをくれました。
オーストラリアの友達はそのストローを使いたくないと言いました。

なぜなら、紙のストローを作る時使う接着剤はとても有害だからと言っていました。

私はそれが本当かどうかわかりませんでした。

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We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious The ice cream was on my friend.


We ate an ice cream at the wharf, which was soooo delicious. The ice cream was onpaid for by my friend. We ate an ice cream at the wharf, which was so delicious. The ice cream was paid for by my friend.

Adding extra characters for emphasis (sooo) is ok for text chatting, but it's never correct for official writing just to be clear. Since you're telling a story here, it's better to phrase that your friend paid for the ice cream, otherwise the reader might think ice cream physically got on your friend.

We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious The ice cream was on my friend.. My friend paid for the ice cream. We ate ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious. My friend paid for the ice cream.

"The ice cream was on my friend" sounds like your friend got ice cream on their clothes.

We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious The ice cream was on my friend. My friend paid for the ice cream. We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious. My friend paid for the ice cream.

I assume this is what you mean. In the right context saying the icecream is "on" them does make sense, but without context it sounds like you dropped the icecream onto them instead.

WMy friend treated me to ice cream and we ate an ice cream at the wharf which. It was soooo delicious The ice cream was on my friend.! My friend treated me to ice cream and we ate an ice cream at the wharf. It was soooo delicious!

I am not sure what you meant by “The ice cream was on my friend”. I assume it meant that she purchased it for you. If so, what a nice friend!

We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious The ice cream was on my friend.. My friend paid for the ice cream. We ate an ice cream at the wharf which was soooo delicious. My friend paid for the ice cream.

That day was too hot so we got thirsty and then, we bought a iced coffee.


That day was too hot, so we got thirsty and then, we bought asome iced coffees. That day was too hot, so we got thirsty and bought some iced coffees.

That day was too hot so we got thirsty and then, we bought a iced coffees. That day was too hot so we got thirsty and bought iced coffees.

That day was too hot so we got thirsty and then, we bought an iced coffee. That day was too hot so we got thirsty and then bought an iced coffee.

That day was toso hot sothat we got thirsty and. So then, we bought an iced coffee. That day was so hot that we got thirsty. So then, we bought an iced coffee.

That day was too hot so we got thirsty and then, we bought a iced coffee. That day was too hot so we got thirsty and bought iced coffee.

My Australian fried bought same coffee.


My Australian friednd also bought samthe coffee. My Australian friend also bought the coffee.

I am not sure if you mean your friend bought the same kind of coffee that you did, or that she also paid for the coffee (in addition to the ice cream earlier). So two options: My Australian friend also bought the coffee. My Australian friend bought the same kind of coffee as me.

My Australian friend bought same coffee (as me). My Australian friend bought same coffee (as me).

My Australian friend also bought the same coffee. My Australian friend also bought the same coffee.

My Australian friend bought same coffee. My Australian friend bought same coffee.

My Australian friend bought the same coffee. My Australian friend bought the same coffee.

Shop staff gave us paper straw.


SThe shop staff gave us paper straws. The shop staff gave us paper straws.

SThe shop staff gave us paper straw. The shop staff gave us paper straw.

SThe shop staff gave us paper straw.s, The shop staff gave us paper straws,

Or you could say "the cashier", or "the barista".

SThe shop staff gave us paper straw. The shop staff gave us paper straw.

SThe shop staff gave us paper straws. The shop staff gave us paper straws.

However when she (my Australian friend)drank it she didn't use a paper straw.


However when she (my Australian friend) drank ither coffee, she didn't use athe paper straw. However when she (my Australian friend) drank her coffee, she didn't use the paper straw.

However when she (my Australian friend) drank it, she didn't use athe paper straw. However when she (my Australian friend) drank it, she didn't use the paper straw.

However when she (but my Australian friend)drank it she didn't use a paper straw didn't use them. but my Australian friend didn't use them.

The word she here wouldn't refer to the friend because you just specified "the shop staff". A sentence shouldn't start with the word "However", it sounds much better combining those two sentences into one.

However, when she (my Australianmy friend) drank ither coffee, she didn't use athe paper straw. However, when my friend drank her coffee, she didn't use the paper straw.

However when she (my Australian friend) drank it she didn't use a paper straw. However when she (my Australian friend) drank it she didn't use a paper straw.

She said " I don't want to use paper straw because paper straw is made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals" I'm not sure if it's true.


She said, " I don't want to use a paper straw because paper straw iss are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals" ." I'm not sure if it's true. She said, "I don't want to use a paper straw because paper straws are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals." I'm not sure if it's true.

She said " I don't want to use the paper straw because paper straw iss are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals" I'm not sure if it's true. She said " I don't want to use the paper straw because paper straws are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals" I'm not sure if it's true.

She said " I don't want to use paper straws because paper straw isthey are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals" . I'm not sure if it's true. She said " I don't want to use paper straws because they are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals". I'm not sure if it's true.

She said " I don't want to use a paper straw because paper straw iss are made from paper and they use a special glue whichthat has a lot of chemicals" I'm not sure if it's true or not. She said "I don't want to use a paper straw because paper straws are made from paper and they use a special glue that has a lot of chemicals" I'm not sure if it's true or not.

She said " I don't want to use paper straws because paper straw iss are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals" ." I'm not sure if it's true. She said " I don't want to use paper straws because paper straws are made from paper and they use a special glue which has a lot of chemicals." I'm not sure if it's true.

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