My new daughter had been born last Monday. My new daughter had been born last Monday.

This is grammatically correct, but a more natural phrase would be. "My newest daughter was born last Monday."

My new daughter had beenwas born last Monday. My new daughter was born last Monday.

My new daughter had beenwas born last Monday. My new daughter was born last Monday.

My new daughter had beenwas born last Monday. My new daughter was born last Monday.

She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago. She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago.

She came back home from the hospital 2two days ago. She came back home from the hospital two days ago.

She came back home from the hospital 2two days ago. She came back home from the hospital two days ago.

If you want to use the digit 2, you need a space after it. However, for small numbers, it often reads better to use the word rather than the digit.

She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago. She came back home from the hospital 2 days ago.

She is perfect(totally / extremely) cute. She is (totally / extremely) cute.

We don't use perfectly as an adjective like this. totally has some of the same "complete" implication, but does come across as somewhat casual.

She is perfectreally cute. She is really cute.

My superioolder daughter was little bit naervous to tatouch her at first. My older daughter was little bit nervous to touch her at first.

My superioolder daughter was little bit narvus to tatch her at first. My older daughter was little bit narvus to tatch her at first.

"Superior" daughter would suggest that one daughter is better than the other. You mean "older" here to mean that her age is higher.

My superioolder daughter was little bit naervous to tatouch her at first. My older daughter was little bit nervous to touch her at first.

superior = better, not older

My superioolder daughter was a little bit naervous to tatouch her at first. My older daughter was a little bit nervous to touch her at first.

But now, she cares for her sistaer and strokes her head duaringwhen she's crying. But now, she cares for her sister and strokes her head when she's crying.

But now, she cares about her sistaer and strokes her head duaringwhen she is crying. But now, she cares about her sister and strokes her head when she is crying.

But now, she cares for her sistaer and strokes her head duaring cryingwhen her sister cries. But now, she cares for her sister and strokes her head when her sister cries.

But now, she cares for her sistaer and strokes her head duaringwhen she's crying. But now she cares for her sister and strokes her head when she's crying.

She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon. She hasn't held her sister yet, but I think that she will try soon.

She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon. She hasn't held her sister yet, but I think that she will try soon.

She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon. She hasn't held her sister yet, but I think that she will try soon.

She hasn't hoeld her sistaer yet, but I think that she will triesy soon. She hasn't held her sister yet, but I think that she will try soon.

I wishhope my daughters will get along with each other. I hope my daughters will get along with each other.

"I wish my daughters will get along with each other." sounds like your daughters are "currently not getting along with each other," but that you "want them to get along with each other".

I wishhope that my daughters will get along with each other. I hope that my daughters will get along with each other.

I wishhope my daughters will get along with each other. I hope my daughters will get along with each other.

"wish" in this context has a sense of "your daughters don't get along together and you want that to be different", rather than that you haven't seen if they do yet. "hope" doesn't have this extra implication, so works better here.

I wishhope my daughters will get along with each other. I hope my daughters will get along with each other.