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Women are included in work more and more included every year, at working,least that is what it i's said. Women are included in work more and more every year, at least that is what's said.

Women are more and more included every year at working, that is what it is saidIt is well-known that number of women in the labor force increases each year. It is well-known that number of women in the labor force increases each year.

Women are more and more included every year at workingin the workforce every year, that is what it iss being said. Women are more and more included in the workforce every year, that is what is being said.

It is even claimasserted that nowadays they even have more power onver decisions than men nowadays. It is even asserted that nowadays they even have more power over decisions than men.

Nevertheless, many women argue that ithis is not the case. Nevertheless, many women argue that this is not the case.

Nevertheless, women argue that it is nothis isn’t the case. Nevertheless, women argue that this isn’t the case.

In this essay I will expose to you the significant changes that women have adcquired during the lasrecent decades in the working world. In this essay I will expose to you the significant changes that women have acquired during recent decades in the working world.

In this short essay I will expose to youlain the significant changes that women have madquirede during the lasrecent decades in the working world. In this short essay I will explain the significant changes that women have made during recent decades in the working world.

In this essay I will expose to you the significant changes that women have adcquired during the last decades in the working world. In this essay I will expose to you the significant changes that women have acquired during the last decades in the working world.

At the same time, I will be writting about the gap that is still touching/impacting woman around the world. At the same time, I will be writing about the gap that is still touching/impacting woman around the world.

I think "touching" works, but "impacting" fits better in the context of this sentence

At the same time, I will be writting about the gapexpounding upon about the disproportionate representation in the labor market that is still touchaffecting womaen around the world. At the same time, I will be expounding upon about the disproportionate representation in the labor market that is still affecting women around the world.

At the same time, I will be writting about the gap that is still touching woman around the world. At the same time, I will be writing about the gap that is still touching woman around the world.

During the Second World War, women have beenwere forced to worked since men had to defend their country. During the Second World War, women were forced to work since men had to defend their country.

During the Second World War, women have beenwere forced to worked since men had to defend their country. During the Second World War, women were forced to worked since men had to defend their country.

During the Second World War, women haved been forced to worked since men had to defend their country. During the Second World War, women had been forced to worked since men had to defend their country.

Había + past participle = had + past participle

Previous to this event, women didn't really have the possibility to work, as they had to take care of their family, and that was the priority at that time. Previous to this event, women didn't really have the possibility to work, as they had to take care of their family, and that was the priority at that time.

Previous to this event, women didn't really have the possibility to work, because they had to take care of their family, t. That was their priority at that time. Previous to this, women didn't really have the possibility to work because they had to take care of their family. That was their priority at that time.

Previous to this event, women didn't really have the possibility to work, they had to take care of their family, that was their priority at that time. Previous to this event, women didn't really have the possibility to work, they had to take care of their family, that was their priority at that time.

Besides the one mistake, this is a really good sentence and is very well structured as if a native wrote it, well done!!!

However, leveraging their abilities to lead, to convince, and to encourage, over the years, women achieved better opportunities over the years. However, leveraging their abilities to lead, to convince, and to encourage, women achieved better opportunities over the years.

Just added commas and moved some words around to make it clear that "leveraging their abilities to lead, to convince, and to encourage" is all one list of examples.

However, by leveraging their leadership abilities, and their abilities to lead, to convince and to encourage, over the years, women have achieved better opportunities. However, by leveraging their leadership abilities, and their abilities to convince and to encourage, over the years, women have achieved better opportunities.

Currently, women can study, can vote(,) and they can even lead big companies. Currently, women can study, can vote(,) and they can even lead big companies.

A situation like this is called the Oxford Comma, and it's a pretty heated subject even in the native English world. You can put a comma after every example in a sentence, if you'd like, or you can leave out the comma like you did. Both are correct, it's just a matter of personal preference.

Currently, women can study, can vote and they can even lead big companies. Currently, women can study, vote and they can even lead big companies.

A women nowadays can dream about being a lawyer, scientist, doctor(,) or whatever she wants. A women nowadays can dream about being a lawyer, scientist, doctor(,) or whatever she wants.

Another example of the Oxford Comma! Whether you use one here or not, both are correct.

A wWomen nowadays can dream about beingbecome a lawyer, a scientist, a doctor, or whatever else she wants. Women nowadays become a lawyer, a scientist, a doctor, or whatever else she wants.

A women nowadays can dream about being a lawyer, scientist, doctor or whatever she wants. A women nowadays can dream about being a lawyer, scientist, doctor or whatever she wants.

In English, we use articles with professions. “Soy artista” = I am an artist

Surely, a woman today can havehas better job opportunities that she couldn't have imagined some decades ago. Surely, a woman today has better job opportunities that she couldn't have imagined some decades ago.

On the other hand, due to prejudgments such as pregnancy or sensitiveness, the quantity/number of women working on high ranks of a company is still less than the quantity/number of men. On the other hand, due to prejudgments such as pregnancy or sensitiveness, the quantity/number of women working on high ranks of a company is still less than the quantity/number of men.

I think "quantity" technically works, but we often don't say "quantity" when referring to people. I think "number of women/men" might work better.

On the other hand, due to prejudgments such aices towards pregnancy or sensitivenessity, the quantitynumber of women working oin high ranks ofat a company is still less than the quantityat of men. On the other hand, due to prejudices towards pregnancy or sensitivity, the number of women working in high ranks at a company is still less than that of men.

On the other hand, due to prejudgments such as pregnancy orand sensitivenessity, the quantity of women working on high ranks of a company is still less than the quantity of men. On the other hand, due to prejudgments such as pregnancy and sensitivity, the quantity of women working on high ranks of a company is still less than the quantity of men.

Regarding politics, for example, there are more malen politicians than womenfemale. Regarding politics, for example, there are more male politicians than female.

"male" is an adjective describing politicians, while "men" is a noun.

RegardingIn respect to politics, for example, there are more malen politicians than womenfemale. In respect to politics, for example, there are more male politicians than female.

In pointAs a matter of fact, even if the women are no longer seen as people who cannot work and must be stay always stay at home taking care of their families, they don't eitherstill don't have the privilege men have to occupy a job today. As a matter of fact, even if women are no longer seen as people who cannot work and must always stay at home taking care of their families, they still don't have the privilege men have to occupy a job today.

In point of fact, eEven if the women are no longer seen as people who cannot work and must be stay always at home taking care of their familieshomemakers who are unable to work, they don't either have thnjoy the same privilege that men have to occupyhave a job today. Even if women are no longer seen as homemakers who are unable to work, they don't enjoy the same privilege that men have to have a job today.

In point of fact, even if the women are no longer seen as people who cannot work and must be stay always at home taking care of their families, they don't eitherstill don’t have the privilege men have to occupy a job today. In point of fact, even if the women are no longer seen as people who cannot work and must be stay always at home taking care of their families, they still don’t have the privilege men have to occupy a job today.

To sum it up, womenthe battle that women have been fighting has allowed them to obtain a better possition in theour society, n. Nevertheless, the battle hais not finished, and there isare still some differences between women and men at workingin the workplace. To sum it up, the battle that women have been fighting has allowed them to obtain a better position in our society. Nevertheless, the battle is not finished, and there are still some differences between women and men in the workplace.

ToIn sum it upmary, women battle allow them to obtain afor better possitions in the society, n. Nevertheless, their battle has not finished, there isare still some differences between women and men at workingin the workforce. In summary, women battle for better positions in society. Nevertheless, their battle has not finished, there are still some differences between women and men in the workforce.

To sum it up, women’s battles have allowed them to obtain a better possition in the society, nevertheless, the battle has not finished, there is still some differences between women and men at workingin the workforce. To sum it up, women’s battles have allowed them to obtain a better position in society, nevertheless, the battle has not finished, there is still some differences between women and men in the workforce.

Thus it is necessary tofor women to continue fighting for equality. Thus it is necessary for women to continue fighting for equality.

Thus, it is necessary tofor women to continue fighting for equality. Thus, it is necessary for women to continue fighting for equality.

Thus it is necessary tofor women to continue fighting for equality. Thus it is necessary for women to continue fighting for equality.