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My university has shared student dormitories for sharing. My university has shared student dormitories.

This phrasing is more natural.

My university has student dormitories for shared housing. My university has student dormitories for shared housing.

Dorms would be described as "shared housing"

My university has student dormitories for sharing. My university has student dormitories.

The defining fact for dorms (as opposed to e.g. apartments) is that they are shared, so you don't need to reiterate that

Both rent and utilites are very uinexpensive, and they are relatively clean, and not too cramped. Both rent and utilites are very inexpensive, they are relatively clean, and not too cramped.

I can see why you'd think it's "unexpensive", but unfortunately the word is an exception and is instead "inexpensive". This can made a list using commas to avoid repeating "and" too much.

Both rent and utilities are very uinexpensive, and they rooms are relatively clean and not too cramped. Both rent and utilities are very inexpensive, and the rooms are relatively clean and not too cramped.

I would reference what is clean and not cramped

Both rent and utilities are very uinexpensive, and they are relatively clean and not too cramped. Both rent and utilities are very inexpensive, and they are relatively clean and not too cramped.

I asked one of my friend who lived in the dormitory how the life there is, and s. She answered that one thing she feels is troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionaer for shared space is shared I asked one of my friend who lived in the dormitory how life there is. She answered that one thing she feels is troublesome is that since the cost for air conditioner for shared space is shared

This is a very long run-on sentence so it's best to split it up a bit. Spelling.

I asked one of my friends who has lived in the dormitory how the life there isthere for a while now how life is in the dorm, and she answered that one thing she feels is troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionar for shared spaceof running the air conditioning is shared I asked one of my friends who has lived there for a while now how life is in the dorm, and she answered that one thing she feels is troublesome is that since the cost of running the air conditioning is shared

"Who lived at the dorm" would imply that she lived there and has now left, but if she lived there and STILL lives there, you'd say "who has lived there for (duration)"

I asked one of my friends who lived in the dormitory how the life there iwas, and she answered that one thing she feels was troublesome is that since the cost for air conditionaring for the shared space is shared I asked one of my friends who lived in the dormitory how the life there was, and she answered that one thing she feels was troublesome is that since the cost for air conditioning for the shared space is shared

"who lived in the dormitory" is past tense and implies she has since moved out. So that needs other parts of the sentence to be in past tense too.

amoung all those who live in the room, everyone becomes reluctant to turn on the air conditionaer when they are alone even if it is hot or cold. among all those who live in the room, everyone becomes reluctant to turn on the air conditioner when they are alone even if it is hot or cold.

Spelling.

amoung all those who live in the room/dorm, everyone becomeis reluctant to turn on the air conditionarit on when they are alone, even if it is hot or cold. among all those who live in the room/dorm, everyone is reluctant to turn it on when they are alone, even if it is hot.

An "air conditioner" is to reference cold air only; we'd say "heat/heating/heater" for warm air

amoung all those who live in the room, everyone becoame reluctant to turn on the air conditionaer when they awere alone even if it iwas hot or cold. among all those who live in the room, everyone became reluctant to turn on the air conditioner when they were alone even if it was hot or cold.