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I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.
As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.
When I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distance. I feel as though I'm running out of battery. I feel I have hypoglycemia attack.
When I eat much, I can run longer distance, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.
I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challenge. But I enjoy it.
I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and phsical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higher activity of the solar flares.
They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.
If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.
Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say:
"Let go, Luke! You should rely on your instinct!"


現在の懸念は、太陽フレアの活動が活発であること

私は30日後に福岡マラソンに出場します。
気温がどんどん低くなってきたので、走るのがずっと快適になりました。
減量している最中は長距離を走るのが非常に辛いです。電池切れのように、低血糖のように感じます。
逆にたくさん食べた時は、もっと長い距離を走れます。しかし体重がてきめんに1-2㎏増えてしまいます。
目標タイムを達成するために、あと10キロ減量する必要があるので、これはジレンマでもあり挑戦でもあります。でも、楽しみながらやっています。
膝や腰に痛みはなく、精神的にも肉体的にも健康状態はかなり良いと思っています。

で、今のところ一番の懸念は、太陽フレアの活動が活発であることです。
それがGPS(全地球測位システム)の精度に影響を与えると言われています。

私は運動やレースでGarminのスマートウォッチForerunner 265に完全に依存しています。
もしGPSがうまく作動せず、走行速度や距離などの情報を誤って伝えられたら、それは致命的です。

例えば、雨の日の公式レースに備えて雨の中での練習が推奨されていますが、それと同様に、スマートウォッチを使わずにトレーニングすべきかもしれません。
ヨーダならこう言うでしょう。「機器を無視しろ、ルーク!本能に従え!」

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I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

But I enjoy it.

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

But I enjoy it.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

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I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

But I enjoy it.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

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When I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distance.

I feel as though I'm running out of battery.

But I enjoy it.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and phsical health condition is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higher activity of the solar flares.

They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).

You should rely on your instinct!"

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They say it affects the accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System).


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They say it affects theGPS accuracy of GPS (Global Positioning System). They say it affects GPS accuracy.

I don't think you have to specify "global positioning system."

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.


As the temperature has become lowdecreases further and lowfurther, it's much more conmfortable to run. As the temperature decreases further and further, it's much more comfortable to run.

“It’s much more comfortable to run” works fine, but “running becomes more comfortable” might be better.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run. As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more confortable to run.

Original sentence is good! You could say: "As the temperature has started to drop, ..." or "As the temperature has started dropping, ..."

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more conmfortable to run. As the temperature has become lower and lower, it's much more comfortable to run.

As the temperature has become lower and lower, it'sdecreases, running outside has gotten much more conmfortable to run. As the temperature decreases, running outside has gotten much more comfortable.

When I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distance.


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When I'mSince I'm actively losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distances. Since I'm actively losing weight, it's very tough to run long distances.

Or: "I am losing weight and it's become very tough to run long distances"

Whilen I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run a long distances. While I'm losing weight, it's very tough to run long distances.

When I'm losinge weight, it's very tough to run arunning long distances. When I lose weight, it's tough running long distances.

I don't quite understand the connection. This makes it sound like you're intentionally losing weight to run long distances. I would say something like: "When I train for marathons, I have to make sure I eat enough. Otherwise, running long distances becomes a challenge."

I feel as though I'm running out of battery.


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I feel as though I'm running out of battery. I feel as though I'm running out of battery.

Nice sentence! You could take it even further and specify *when* you feel like this. For example: "After only 10km, I feel as though I'm running out of battery"

I feel as though I'm running out of battpower/energy. I feel as though I'm running out of power/energy.

I often feel as though I'm running out of battery. I often feel as though I'm running out of battery.

I feel I have hypoglycemia attack.


I feel like I have hypoglycemia attacka fall in blood sugar levels. I feel like I have a fall in blood sugar levels.

Hypoglycemia isn’t really a commonly used word.

Sometimes, I feel I'm haveing a hypoglycemiac attack. Sometimes, I feel I'm having a hypoglycemic attack.

For this, I think you *need* to at least somewhat specify when you feel like this. Other suggestions: "If I push myself too hard, I feel like I'm having a hypoglycemic attack" or "If I push myself too hard, I feel like I might have a hypoglycemic attack" etc.

I feel IAs if I'm haveing hypoglycemia attack. As if I'm having hypoglycemia.

I feel I havet almost feels like a hypoglycemia attackc episode. It almost feels like a hypoglycemic episode.

When I eat much, I can run longer distance, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.


When I eat mucha lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms. When I eat a lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms.

When I eat too much, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms in weight. When I eat too much, I can run longer distances, although I gain 1-2 kilograms in weight.

When I eat muchore, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight by 1-2 kilograms. When I eat more, I can run longer distances, although I gain 1-2 kilograms.

When I eat mucha lot, I can run longer distances, although I gain weight bybut I gain 1-2 kilograms. When I eat a lot, I can run longer distances, but I gain 1-2 kilograms.

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challenge.


I need to lose more 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge. I need to lose more 10 kilograms in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dilemma and a challenge.

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed recordhit my target, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge. I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to hit my target, so it's a dilemma and a challenge.

Or: "I need to lose 10kg more in order to hit my personal best, ...."

I need to lose 10 more kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenemma and a challenge. I need to lose 10 more kilograms in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dilemma and a challenge.

sorry, i don't understand aimed record. i think you mean to be in the weight class you're aiming for?

I need to lose 10 kilograms more in order to get the aimed record, so it's a dillenma and a challengt's a dilemma and a challenge, because I need to lose 10 kilograms to achieve my target time. It's a dilemma and a challenge, because I need to lose 10 kilograms to achieve my target time.

But I enjoy it.


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Concern Right Now Is The High Actvity of Solar Flares


Concern Right Now Is The High Activity of Solar Flares Is The Main Concern Right Now The High Activity of Solar Flares Is The Main Concern Right Now

Concern Right Now Is The Highs About The Increased Activity of Solar Flares Concerns About The Increased Activity of Solar Flares

Concern Right Now Is The High Actvity ofed About the High Solar Flares Activity Concerned About the High Solar Flare Activity

I'm going to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.


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I'm gointending/planning to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days. I'm intending/planning to run in the Fukuoka Marathon in 30 days.

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I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and phsical health condition is rather good.


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I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good. I don't feel any knee or hip pain, and I think my mental and physical condition is rather good.

Or: "I don't feel any pain in my knees or hips, and I think my mental and physical health is rather good"

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good. I don't feel any knee pain or hip pain, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good.

I don't feel any knee pains or hip pains, and I think my mental and physical health condition is rather good. I don't feel any knee or hip pain, and I think my mental and physical health is rather good.

My biggest concern right now is the higher activity of the solar flares.


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My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares. My biggest concern right now is the increased activity of solar flares.

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares. My biggest concern right now is the increased activity of solar flares.

My biggest concern right now is the higherincreased activity of the solar flares. My biggest concern right now is the increased activity of the solar flares.

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.


I totally rely on my excercise and races onusing the Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265. I totally rely on my exercise and races using the Garmin smartwatch.

Just Garmin Smartwatch is enough :)

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265Garmin Forerunner smartwatch during my training and races. I totally rely on my Garmin Forerunner smartwatch during my training and races.

In English, we often don't include the specific make/model of the product we are talking about. It can come across like you are trying to show-off.

I totally rely on my excercise and races on Garmin smartwatch, a Forerunner 265, for my exercise and races. I totally rely on my Garmin smartwatch, a Forerunner 265, for my exercise and races.

sorry i don't understand is this what you meant?

I totally rely on myWhen I excercise and races onun races, I completely rely on my Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265. When I exercise and run races, I completely rely on my Garmin smartwatch, Forerunner 265.

If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.


If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fataldangerous/bad. If GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information of my running speed, distance, etc., it would be dangerous/bad.

Fatal means that you could die because of it. If that’s what you meant though, then ignore my correction.

If GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information ofabout my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal. If GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information about my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fatal.

The use of the word "Fatal" is very dramatic! It makes it sounds like a matter of life and death.

If the GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information ofabout my running speed, distance, etc., it would be fataawful. If the GPS doesn't work well and gives me the wrong information about my running speed, distance, etc., it would be awful.

it would be fatal implies you would literally die because of incorrect information

If my GPS doesn't work well and give me the wrong information ofproperly and my running speed, distance, etc., are off, it would be fataldisastrous. If my GPS doesn't work properly and my running speed, distance, etc., are off, it would be disastrous.

"fatal" means something that can kill you. We don't really use it to exaggerate. People will think you will die.

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.


For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race. For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy day official race.

For example, they say event organizers suggest that I should practice running in the rain, as thit may be training in case of the rainy dayon the official race day. For example, the event organizers suggest that I should practice running in the rain, as it may be raining on the official race day.

Who is "they"?

For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as the training in case of the rainy dayrainy weather during the official race. For example, they say that I should practice running in the rain as training in case of rainy weather during the official race.

For example, they say thatmany people say I should practice running in the rain as the training in casein case it rains ofn the rainy day officialday of the race. For example, many people say I should practice running in the rain in case it rains on the day of the race.

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke!


Likewise, I shouldf I do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke! Likewise, If I do my exercise without wearing the smartwatch, Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke!

Likewise, I should do my excercisetraining without wearing thea smartwatch, Yoda might say: . In the words of Yoda, "Let go, Luke! Likewise, I should do my training without wearing a smartwatch. In the words of Yoda, "Let go, Luke!

Or: "Likewise, I should exercise without wearing a smartwatch"

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch,. As Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke! Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing the smartwatch. As Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke!

Likewise, I should do my excercise without wearing themy smartwatch,. Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke! Likewise, I should exercise without wearing my smartwatch. Yoda might say: "Let go, Luke!

You should rely on your instinct!"


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You should rely on your instincts!" You should rely on your instincts!"

You should rely on your instincts!" You should rely on your instincts!"

You should rRely on your instinct, you should!" Rely on your instinct, you should!"

This is how Yoda would really talk, haha

When I eat much, I can run longer distance.


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