When I looked up which shrines's god has the highest power for driving safety, Google indicated me " "Kanda Myojin"." When I looked up which shrine's god has the highest power for driving safety, Google indicated "Kanda Myojin."

When I looked up which shrines's god has the highest power for driving safety, Google indicated mecame up with " Kanda Myojin". When I looked up which shrine's god has the highest power for driving safety, Google came up with "Kanda Myojin".

It's just one shrine so it's "shrine's" and not "shrines'".

When I looked up which shrines's god hasd the highgreatest power fover driving safety, Google indicated me " "Kanda Myojin". When I looked up which shrine's god had the greatest power over driving safety, Google indicated "Kanda Myojin".

When I looked up which shrines' god hais the highemost power forful when it comes to driving safetly, Google indicated me " that it is "Kanda Myojin". When I looked up which shrines' god is the most powerful when it comes to driving safely, Google indicated that it is "Kanda Myojin".

The shrine is known asto give good fortune for the business. The shrine is known to give good fortune for business.

The shrine is known asto bring good fortun for thee to businesses. The shrine is known to bring good fortune to businesses.

The shrine is known as good fortun for the business. The shrine is known as good fortun for business.

The shrine is known asto bring good fortun for thee to businesses. The shrine is known to bring good fortune to businesses.

That's why many people in business persons who want to getbe success at their work wofuld come, but at the same time, it's good for drivers's safety. That's why many people in business who want to be successful come, but at the same time, it's good for driver's safety.

That's why many business personsople who want to getbecome successful at their work would come but same time it's goodvisit the shrine, but it's also known to provide safety for drivers' safety. That's why many business people who want to become successful at their work visit the shrine, but it's also known to provide safety for drivers.

That's why many business persons who want to get successed at their work would come but at the same time it's good for drivers' safety. That's why many business persons who want to succeed at their work would come but at the same time it's good for drivers' safety.

That's why many business personsople who want to getbe successful at their work would come, but at the same time it's good for drivers' safety. That's why many business people who want to be successful at work would come, but at the same time it's good for drivers' safety.

Persons is very rarely used, I suggest using people unless you're certain persons is the right word to use

I've never getotten in any serious car accident. I've never gotten in any serious car accident.

I've never getotten into any serious car accidents. I've never gotten into any serious car accidents.

You should join these 2 sentences together, (Since....., [outcome]) (……ので、[結果]). Like you wouldn't say いつも持っているので。それ以来、事故は起こしていません。

I never gethaven't got in any serious car accident. I haven't got in any serious car accident.

I have never getot into any serious car accidents. I have never got into any serious car accidents.

I'm not sure itf it's because of the power of the lucky charm. I'm not sure if it's because of the power of the lucky charm.

I'm not sure itf it's because of the power of the lucky charm. I'm not sure if it's because of the power of the lucky charm.

I'm not sure itf it's because of the power of the lucky charm. I'm not sure if it's because of the power of the lucky charm.

I'm not sure it because ofwhether that is due to the power of the lucky charm. I'm not sure whether that is due to the power of the lucky charm.

TFor the first day of January, I invited two my friends to go "to Hatsumode". For the first day of January, I invited two my friends to go to Hatsumode.

TOn the first day of January, I invited two of my friends to go to "Hatsumode". On the first day of January, I invited two of my friends to go to "Hatsumode".

The first day of January, I invited two of my friends to go to "Hatsumode". The first day of January, I invited two of my friends to go to "Hatsumode".

TOn the first day of January, I invited two of my friends to go to "Hatsumode". On the first day of January I invited two of my friends to go to "Hatsumode".

Then I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a lucky charm. Then I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a lucky charm.

Then I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a lucky charm. I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a lucky charm.

"Then" is like "そして", and I don't think it really fits here, since you didn't write anything that precedes this.

Then I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a/the lucky charm. Then I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a/the lucky charm.

ThenWhile there I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a lucky charm. While there I prayed for no more traffic accidents and bought a lucky charm.

For nowBy this time, five years have passed. By this time, five years have passed.

Even better: Five years have now passed since the accident.

For now, five years have passed. since then, Five years have passed since then,

For now, five years have passed. For now, five years have passed.

For nNow, five years have passed. Now five years have passed

But I have still have been putting it onkept the charm with me. But I have still kept the charm with me.

I would mention the charm here, otherwise it might be unclear if by "it" you mean the accident or the charm. It's not unusual for a person to say they carry their (traumatic event) with them, in a figurative sense.

Bbut I have still have been puttbeen carrying it onaround with me. but I have still been carrying it around with me.

You shouldn't really start sentences with "but". I think you can join these 2 sentences together.

But I still have been puttcarrying it on with me. But I still have been carrying it with me.

Butand I still have been putting it on with mecarry it with me every day. and I still carry it with me every day.

These really short sentences should be combined into a few longer ones

Since I've haved it with me all the time., Since I've had it with me all the time,

Since I have it with me all the time., Since I have it with me all the time,

Sinceo, I have it all the time. So, I have it all the time.

Since I have it all the ticarrying it with me. Since carrying it with me

After the traffic accident, I went to a shrine to takeget a lucky charm. After the traffic accident, I went to a shrine to get a lucky charm.

After the traffic accident, I went to a shrine to takeget a lucky charm. After the traffic accident, I went to a shrine to get a lucky charm.

After the traffic accident I went to a shrine to takeget a lucky charm. After the traffic accident I went to a shrine to get a lucky charm.

After the traffic accident I went to a shrine to takreceive a lucky charm., After the traffic accident I went to a shrine to receive a lucky charm,

Renewing my Driving License : Part 2 Renewing my Driving License: Part 2

We more commonly refer to it as a driver's license.

Renewing my Drivinger's License : Part 2 Renewing my Driver's License : Part 2

Renewing my Driving/Driver's License : Part 2 Renewing my Driving/Driver's License : Part 2

We call it "Omamori"." We call it "Omamori."

We call ithese "Omamori". We call these "Omamori".

W(we call it "Omamori".), (we call it "Omamori"),

Then I made a wish to god of the shrineat the shrine for one of the gods for traffic safety. Then I made a wish at the shrine for one of the gods for traffic safety.

Then I made a wish tofor road safety to the god of the shrine traffic safety. Then I made a wish for road safety to the god of the shrine.

TI then made a wish to the god of the shrine for traffic safety. I then made a wish to the god of the shrine for traffic safety.

Thenand made a wish to god of the shrine wishing for traffic safety. and made a wish to god of the shrine wishing for traffic safety.

These three sentences should all be one, since you used then to continue talking about what you were doing.

New yYear's holidDay would come soon. New Year's Day would come soon.

The New yYear's holidays would come soonere about to start. The New Year's holidays were about to start.

The New yYear's holiday would come soon. The New Year's holiday would come soon.

New years holiday would come soonas fast approaching. New years holiday was fast approaching.

It's up to you whether you believe it or not. It's up to you whether you believe it or not.