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The Huaihe River is in the central-eastern part of China. It originates from Tongbo Mountain, the conjunction of Hubei, Henan, and Anhui Province. It flows into the Huang Sea and Dong Sea on the eastern coast of China. The middle of the Huaihe River basin is Anhui province.
On both sides of the Huaihe River in the western part of Anhui province are two prefecture-level cities, one on the south is Lu'an City, another on the north is Fuyang City. Fuyang governs three districts, four counties and one county-level city.
Two counties bordering the Huaihe River are Yingshang and Funan. Yingshang is considered the county that has the most scenic spots and the best ecosystem in Fuyang.
It has a 5-a scenic spot: Balihe. Four 4-a scenic spots: You-family Park, Digou, Mingqing Garden and Wulihe Wetland Park. Since Yingshang borders the Huaihe River, it has a lot of lakes, rivers and wetlands.
The vegetation there is luxuriant and everywhere. Yingshang County seat looks clean, tidy and modern.
All the streets in the county seat are broad and straight. Along both sides of the streets, there are tall trees, lush bushes and flowers. All lakes and rivers in the county seat are well maintained.
Water in the rivers and lakes is very clear. The banks of them are planted with trees, grass and flowers. The entire county seat is like a big garden.
People live and work in the "garden".
It originates from Tongbo Mountain, at the conjunctionintersection of Hubei, Henan, and Anhui Province.
If you mean Tongbo Mountain is on the borders between these three provinces, then 'intersection' or 'meeting point' is more commonly used.
Intersection, meeting point. Thank you very much.
On both sides of the Huaihe River in the western part of Anhui province are two prefecture-level cities, one on the south is Lu'an City, another on the north is Fuyang City.
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In the western part of Anhui province, each side of the Huaihe River has a prefecture-level city: on the south, Lu'an City; on the north, Fuyang City. (Your sentence isn't wrong, this is just more natural for written English)
Four 4-a scenic spots: You-familyFamily Park, Digou, Mingqing Garden and Wulihe Wetland Park.
The banks of themriverbanks are planted with trees, grass and flowers.
We don't usually say 'banks of rivers/them'
Thank you very much.
The HuaiheHuai River is in the central-eastern part of eastern China.
It’s usually called the Huai River in English, or simply the Huai (spelled “Hwai” in older books). “Central-eastern” isn’t idiomatic in English.
It originates from Tongbo Mountain, (at) the conjunction of Hubei, Henan, and Anhui Provinceprovinces.
Instead of “originates” you could say it “rises from Tongbo Mountain” or “its headwaters are on Tongbo Mountain.”
It flows into the HuangYellow Sea and Dongthe East China Sea on the eastern coast of China.
The middle of the HuaiheHuai River basin is Anhui provinceProvince.
suggestion: Anhui Province occupies the middle of the Huai River basin.
On bothopposite sides (or: banks) of the HuaiheHuai River in the western part of Anhui provinceProvince are two prefecture-level cities., one on On the south is Lu'an City, anotherand on the north is Fuyang City.
“On both sides” could mean that both cities straddle the river (both cities are on both banks) or that there a four cities, two on each side of the river. more natural: “…are two prefecture-level cities, Lu'an on the south and Fuyang on the north.” (It’s not necessary to add “City” after each city’s name.)
Thank you very much. Every time you correct my essay, I learn a lot from the corrections.
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It originates from Tongbo Mountain, the conjunction (the junction ? Meeting point ? ) of Hubei, Henan, and Anhui ProvinceProvinces.
Yes. I used a wrong word.
It flows into the Huang Sea and Dong SeaSeas on the eastern coast of China.
The middle of the Huaihe River basin is border ( or start of the ) Anhui province.
The central area of Huaihe River Basin is the territory of Anhui Province. The central area of Huaihe River Basin is under the jurisdiction of Anhui Province.
On both sides of the Huaihe River in the western part of Anhui province are two prefecture-level cities, the one on the south is Lu'an City, another and the other on the north is Fuyang City.
Yingshang is considered the county that has the most scenic spotsareas and the best ecosystem in Fuyang.
It has a 5-a scenic spotspots : the first being Balihe.
FourThe other 4-a scenic spots: are You-family Park, Digou, Mingqing Garden and Wulihe Wetland Park.
I hope I understood this correctly.
In China, scenic spots are rated from 1A to 5A by the National Bureau of Cultural and Tourism.
The vegetation there is luxuriant and everywhereall over.
All the streets in the county seat are broadwide and straight.
Along both sides of the streetsstreet, there are tall trees, lush bushes and flowers.
The river banks of them are planted with trees, grass and flowers.
People live and work in thethis "garden".
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