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Don’t have to capitalize prepositions in title.

SinceriHonestly, I prefer to watch the films at home. Honestly, I prefer to watch films at home.

Sincerily, I prefer to watch the films at home. I prefer to watch the films at home.

No need for “sincerely.” Unless the reader had a reason to think you liked theater movies more.

Sincerily, I prefer to watch the films at home. I prefer to watch films at home.

“Sincerely" is a bit too formal. If you're talking about films in general, no need for "the" if you're not talking about a some specific films.

In sSpain, the sound in thevolume in cinemas is loud. In Spain, the sound volume in cinemas is loud.

Names (Nina, Paolo), town names (Rome, Napoli), countries, etc. are written with a capital letter.

In sSpain, the sound in the cinema is loud. In Spain, the sound in the cinema is loud.

In sSpain, the sound in the cinema is loud. In Spain, the sound in the cinema is loud.

Country names are capitalized. I can only speak for American English, but we would say "the movies" and not "the cinema"- though going to the cinema might be more of a British English thing?

If people listen to music, and the special effects in aare very strong sound level/loud, they can get problems in their audition. If people listen to music and the special effects are very strong/loud, they can get problems in their audition.

What do you mean with 'audition'?

If people listen to loud music, and theloud special effects in a very strong sound levelat the movies, they can get problems inwith their auditionhearing. If people listen to loud music and loud special effects at the movies, they can get problems with their hearing.

Not sure how the music connects to the special effects. If people listen to it all, they hurt their hearing? Perhaps regional but I’ve never heard it called the “cinema” most call it the “movies” or “theater”

If people are listening to music, and the special effects in a very strong sound level, they can get problems in their auditionare loud, they can have hearing problems. If people are listening to music and the special effects are loud, they can have hearing problems.

"Audition" is not used to describe hearing. This word is used to describe things like doing a musical performance to get into an orchestra.

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Now I don't go to the cinema, it'movies. It’s a pity because I always I liked to see the movies in the big screen. Now I don't go to the movies. It’s a pity because I always liked to see movies in the big screen.

Now I don't go to the cinema, anymore. it's a pity because always I liked to see the movies ion the big screen. Now I don't go to the cinema anymore. it's a pity because always I liked to see the movies on the big screen.

Prepositions are tricky- I'd look up the difference between "in" and "on"