June 12, 2020
I am definitely night person. I always sleep at 3 am because I have my routine. when I do not do my routine, I feel gloomy. I basically wake up at 10 am, and I listen to music,DJing or study. Next, I eat lunch, and do muscle training. After this work, I make relax time, for example, watching Netflix. When I finish these things, the time is 7 pm, so I eat dinner with my family, and after this, I watch TV show. My family always sleep around 11 pm, so I start to study while listening to music until 3 am.
I always go to sleep at 3 am because I havedue to my routine.
I always go to sleep at 3 am due to my routine.
when I do not do my routine, I feel gloomy.I feel gloomy when I don't follow my routine,
I feel gloomy when I don't follow my routine,
After this work, I make relax time, for example,at, I relax by doing things like watching Netflix.
After that, I relax by doing things like watching Netflix.
When I finish these things,It's 7 pm by the time I've finished everything. At theat time is 7 pm, so, I eat dinner with my family, and after this, I watch TV showafterward.
It's 7 pm by the time I've finished everything. At that time, I eat dinner with my family and I watch TV afterward.
My family always sleeps at around 11 pm, so I start to studying while listening to music until 3 am.
My family always sleeps at around 11 pm, so I start studying while listening to music until 3 am.
MORNING PERSON OR NIGHT PERSON? MORNING PERSON OR NIGHT PERSON?
I am definitely a night person. I am definitely a night person.
I always go to sleep at 3 am because I have my routine. I always go to sleep at 3 am because I have my routine.
wWhen I do not dofollow my routine, I feel gloomrumpy.
When I do not follow my routine, I feel grumpy.
I basically wake up at 10 am, and I listen to music, DJing, or study.
I basically wake up at 10 am, and I listen to music, DJ, or study.
Next, I eat lunch, and do muscleweight training.
Next, I eat lunch, and do weight training.
After this work, I make relax timeat, I have some time to relax, for example, watching Netflix.
After that, I have some time to relax, for example, watching Netflix.
WThen I finish these things, the time iit's 7 pm, so I eat dinner with my family, and after this, Iwards watch TV show.
Then it's 7 pm, so I eat dinner with my family, and afterwards watch TV.
MThe rest of my family always sleepgoes to bed around 11 pm, so I start tobut I study while listening to music until 3 am.
The rest of my family always goes to bed around 11 pm, but I study while listening to music until 3 am.
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Good job! You are quite the night owl!
MORNING PERSON OR NIGHT PERSON
I am definitely a night person. I am definitely a night person.
In English we often say 'night owl', you can say either.
I always sleepgo to bed at 3 am because I have mya routine.
I always go to bed at 3am because I have a routine.
Using 'my' is correct but just using 'a' sounds more appropriate to me.
when I do not dofollow my routine, I feel gloomy.
when I do not follow my routine, I feel gloomy.
We often use 'follow' when talking about diets/routines/courses etc, ie organised plans.
I basically wake up at 10 am, and I listen to music, do some DJing or study.
I basically wake up at 10am, and I listen to music, do some DJing or study.
After this work, I make relax time, for example,ese activities, I spend time relaxing, by watching Netflix for example.
After these activities, I spend time relaxing, by watching Netflix for example.
When I finish these things, the timewatching netflix, its 7 pm, so I eat dinner with my family, and after thisat, I watch TV shows.
When I finish watching netflix, its 7pm, so I eat dinner with my family, and after that, I watch TV shows.
'these things' is plural, but you are referring to watching netflix, which is singular.
My family always sleepgo to bed around 11 pm, so I start tobut I study while listening to music until 3 am.
My family always go to bed around 11pm, but I study while listening to music until 3am.
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You use commas more often than we usually do in English so the 'flow' of your text felt odd. Using the right linking words (so, then, as a result etc) in the right situation will help you a lot.
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I am definitely night person. I am definitely a night person. I am definitely a night person. In English we often say 'night owl', you can say either. I am definitely a night person. I am definitely a night person. |
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I always sleep at 3 am because I have my routine.
I always Using 'my' is correct but just using 'a' sounds more appropriate to me. I always go to sleep at 3 am because I have my routine. I always go to sleep at 3 am because I have my routine.
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when I do not do my routine, I feel gloomy.
when I do not We often use 'follow' when talking about diets/routines/courses etc, ie organised plans.
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I basically wake up at 10 am, and I listen to music,DJing or study.
I basically wake up at 10
I basically wake up at 10 am, and I listen to music, DJ |
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Next, I eat lunch, and do muscle training.
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After this work, I make relax time, for example, watching Netflix.
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When I finish these things, the time is 7 pm, so I eat dinner with my family, and after this, I watch TV show.
When I finish 'these things' is plural, but you are referring to watching netflix, which is singular.
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My family always sleep around 11 pm, so I start to study while listening to music until 3 am.
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