mMy first text My first text

Capitals are important in English.

mMy fFirst tText My First Text

Titles should be capitalized

mMy fFirst tText My First Text

hHello, my name is Pablo, i and I want to learning the idioms, i. I am happy, but need help. Hello, my name is Pablo and I want to learn idioms. I am happy but need help.

There are too many commas that don't make sense. With your current structure it would have made more sense like this: "Hello, my name is Pablo. I want to learn idioms. I am happy but need help." I think you're using commas like periods. That being said, the first correction I made improves the structure and is significantly better. Overall good job! You can do this!

hHello, my name is Pablo, i. I want to learning the English idioms, i. I am happy,. I need help. Hello, my name is Pablo. I want to learn English idioms. I am happy. I need help.

Break this up into complete sentences. "I" is always capitalized.

hHello, my name is Pablo, i. I want to learning the idioms, i English. I am happy, but need some help! Hello, my name is Pablo. I want to learn English. I am happy, but need some help!