We areOur dream is to travel abroad, for example i, to Italy, France,Mekke … and Mecca. Our dream is to travel abroad, for example, to Italy, France, and Mecca.

We areOur dream is to go abroad for example i, to Italy, France,Mekke … and Mecca. Our dream is to go abroad for example, to Italy, France, and Mecca.

We areOur dream is to travel abroad, for example ito Italy, France, or Mekke …. Our dream is to travel abroad, for example to Italy, France, or Mekke.

I meet someone there. I met someone there.

As a reader, I don't know where you mean by "there." Do you mean from university? If so, change to "I met someone at my university"

I meet someone there. I met someone there.

I meet someone there. I met someone there.

He is a very nice and handsome. He is very nice and handsome.

He is a very nice and handsome. He is very nice and handsome.

He is awas very nice and handsome. He was very nice and handsome.

I guessthink I like to hehim. I think I like him.

I don't understand your original sentence, but if you mean that you might be realizing you like this man romantically, this edit works well.

I guess like to he.

I honestly don’t know what you’re trying to say here. You probably mean “I guess I like him”

I guess I like to hehim. I guess I like him.

"He" is the subject, "him" is object

I have dreams about heim. I have dreams about him.

Here, "dreams" would signify having dreams while you are asleep, dreaming about him. But if you mean you have desires/wishes involving him, I would change this to, "I think about spending time with him."

I have s dream about heim. I haves dream about him.

I have d a dream about heim. I had a dream about him.

I guess takas placesgoing out / traveling together. I guess going out / traveling together.

"Going out" would mean going to local places with him, where "traveling" would mean visiting far away places together.

I guess takas places. I guess takas places.

Don’t understand what takas places is, sorry.

I guess takas places. I guess takas places.

Not sure what this means so I can't correct it properly, sorry

My partwork is very hard so l don’t like it. My work is very hard so l don’t like it.

I don't know what you mean by "part." Are you speaking about your job? If so, we can say "work." If you are speaking about school, you could say "My classes are very hard, so I don't like them."

My part is very hard so l don’t like it. My part is very hard so l don’t like it.

My parsubject is very hard, so l don’t like it. My subject is very hard, so l don’t like it.

I assume you're talking about what you're studying

There is a lot of memorazization. There is a lot of memorization.

There is a lot of memorazisation. There is a lot of memorisation.

There is a lot of memorazization. There is a lot of memorization.

İI don't like a memorazization. I don't like memorization.

İI dont like a memorazisation. I dont like a memorisation.

İI don't like a memorazization. I don't like memorization.

Very small. Very small.

VIt’s very smal.l. It’s very small.

Very small. Very small.

My uUniversıity pPeriod My University Period

Title capitalization rules. Alternative titles: My University Days, My College Days

My universıity period My university period

My universıity period My university period

I began to universıity at in 2023 year. I began university in 2023.

Use "in" before months or years

I began tostarted universıty at in 2023 year. I started universıty in 2023.

Using “started” is a bit more natural

I began to universıity at in 2023 year. I began university in 2023.

"In [year]" No need to put the word "year" after the number

2023 iswas a difficult years for me because l haved an A exam. 2023 was a difficult year for me because l had an A exam.

2023 iswas a difficult years for me because l have Ad an exam. 2023 was a difficult year for me because l had an exam.

2023 iswas a difficult years for me because lI have Ad an exam. 2023 was a difficult year for me because I had an exam.

I have workstudied 10 hours a days, generally. I studied 10 hours a day, generally.

If we are still speaking about university, use "studied" here. But if you are switching to talk about working a job, "worked" is correct

I have worked 10 hours a days generally. I work 10 hours a day generally.

I’m not sure if you’re talking about what you did in 2023. If you are, it’d be “I worked 10 hours a day”

I havegenerally/normally/usually worked 10 hours a days generally. I generally/normally/usually worked 10 hours a day.

İIt iwas very hard. It was very hard.

We are talking about the past => past tense

İIt is very hard., It is very hard,

İIt iwas very hard. It was very hard.

But l loved it. But l loved it.

Bbut l love it. but l love it.

But l loved it. But l loved it.

I amMy dream is living in İIstanbul so very studied. My dream is living in Istanbul.

The original sentence needs some work to be understood. At the end, if you mean that you need to have a good education in order to live in Istanbul, you can add at the end, ", so I need a good education."

I amMy dream is livingto live in İIstanbul sto very studied.study My dream is to live in Istanbul to study

I’m also not clear on what you were trying to say which is why I assumed you want to live in Istanbul to further your studies. If not, it’d be “My dream is to live in Istanbul, so I’m studying very hard.”

I amMy dream is livingto live in İIstanbul, so veryI studied very much. My dream is to live in Istanbul, so I studied very much.

I won to Fakgot into the faculty of medicine. I got into the faculty of medicine.

I wongo to Fakculty of mMedicine. I go to Faculty of Medicine.

I don’t know if you mean you got into faculty of medicine? If so, you should say “I got into the Faculty of Medicine” but I’m gonna assume you already go there bcos of ur next sentence

I won to Fakgot accepted to the faculty of medicine. I got accepted to the faculty of medicine.

I like a my school but. I like my school but

I like a my school, but. I like my school, but

I like a my school but. I like my school.

İit is a small school. it is small.

Combine this line with the previous sentence

İit is a small school. it is small.

İBut it is a small school. But it is a small school.

But İHowever, Istanbul is very beautiful ı, I like it. However, Istanbul is very beautiful, I like it.

To avoid repeating "but" too many times, we can say "however" here

But İIstanbul is very beautiful ı. I like it. Istanbul is very beautiful . I like it.

But İIstanbul is very beautiful ı, I like it. But Istanbul is very beautiful, I like it.

There are have Aa lot of places to visit f. For example, Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, and Üsküdar …. There are a lot of places to visit. For example, Ayasofya mosque, Süleymaniye mosque, and Üsküdar.

There are have Aa lot of places to visit, for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, and Üsküdar …. There are a lot of places to visit, for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, and Üsküdar.

There are have Aa lot of places to visit, for example Ayasofya mosque , Süleymaniye mosque, Üsküdar …, etc. There are a lot of places to visit, for example Ayasofya mosque, Süleymaniye mosque, Üsküdar, etc.

İI have a few friends. I have a few friends.

İI have a few friends. I have a few friends.

İI have a few friends. I have a few friends.

Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra …. Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur and Hümeyra.

Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra …. Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra.

Some of them are Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra …. Some of them are Hatice, Aysu, Hüdanur, and Hümeyra.