Sept. 1, 2024
Yesterday's Hike
I went on a hike yesterday with several friends.
It was our first hike this autumn. The weather was still hot, so we chose a cool trail including a deep cave.
We had planned to reach the cave opening around two hours before the hottest time, but we underestimated the effect of weather on the human body.
One of our friends got sunstroke on the way to the mountain. Luckily, the symptoms were quite mild. We left him in a grocery store where the owner could care for him.
We finally reached the cave one hour before the hottest time and spent three hours exploring it.
It's really extraordinary. I have traveled to many huge caves in China, but all of them have good infrastructure. This cave doesn't have electricity or a phone signal. As a visitor, we need to have a certificated guide with us and bring professional equipment such as headlights and hard hats.
The most interesting part was descending through a rope to deeper depths of tens of meters. I had never done this before, but I observed others while waiting in line, so it was quite smooth when I did it.
It's always fun to experience something new.
When we returned, we picked up our friend who had been unwell. He fully recovered and told us it was so nice to take a nap on the mountainside.
It was a nice day for all of us.
昨天和几个朋友去徒步了。
这是我们今秋的第一次徒步。天气仍然热，所以我们选择了一条凉爽的路线，包括有一个深洞。
原本计划在最热的时间到来前两小时到达洞口，但我们低估了天气对人体的影响。
我们的一个朋友在去山上的路上中暑了。幸运的是，症状轻微。我们把他放在一家杂货店，在那里店主可以照他它。
我们终于在最热的时间到来前一小时到达洞穴，然后花了三个小时探索洞穴。
这里真的很特别。我去过中国的许多大洞穴，但它们都有良好的基础设施。这个洞没有电，也没有电话信号。作为游客，我们需要有一名持证导游，并携带专业设备，如头灯和安全帽。
最有趣的部分是通过一根绳子下降到几十米深的地方。我以前从来没有这样做过，但是我在排队的时候观察了别人，所以做的很顺利。
体验新事物总是很有趣的。
当我们回来时，我们去接生病的朋友。他完全康复了，告诉我们在山腰上睡个午觉真是太好了。
对我们来说都是美好的一天。
Yesterday's Hike
I went on a hike yesterday with several friends.
It was our first hike this autumn.
The weather was still hot, so we chose a cool trail that includinged a deep cave.
We had planned to reach the cave opening around two hours before the hottest time, but we underestimated the effect of the weather on the human body.
One of our friends got sunstroke on the way to the mountain.
Luckily, the symptoms were quite mild.
We left him inat a grocery store where the owner could care for him.
We finally reached the cave one hour before the hottest time and spent three hours exploring it.
It's really extraordinary.
I have traveled to many huge caves in China, but all of them have good infrastructure.
This cave doesn't have electricity or a phone signal.
As a visitor, we need to have a certificated guide with us and bring professional equipment, such as headlights and hard hats.
The most interesting part was descending through a rope to deeper depths of tens of meters.
I had never done this before, but I observed others while waiting in line, so it was quite smooth when I did it.
It's always fun to experience something new.
When we returned, we picked up our friend who had been unwell.
He fully recovered and told us it was so nice to take a nap on the mountainside.
It was a nice day for all of us.
Sept. 2, 2024
I'm glad that your friend recovered and that everyone had a nice time.
Sept. 3, 2024
Thank you so much!
He felt extremely tired, maybe it was because of the weather and his lack of daily exercise.
Have a nice day!
Sept. 3, 2024
You're welcome. Have a nice day too.
Yesterday's Hike
I went on a hike yesterday with several friends.
It was our first hike this autumn.
The weather was still hot, so we chose a cool trail including a deep cave.
We had planned to reach the cave opening around two hours before the hottest time of the day, but we underestimated the effect of weather on the human body.
One of our friends got sunstroke on the way to the mountain.
Luckily, the symptoms were quite mild.
We left him in a grocery store where the owner could care for him.
We finally reached the cave one hour before the hottest time and spent three hours exploring it.
It' was really extraordinary.
I have traveled to many huge caves in China, but all of them haved good infrastructure.
This cave doesidn't have electricity or a phone signal.
As a visitor, we needed to have a certificated guide with us and bring professional equipment such as headlights and hard hats.
The most interesting part was descending through a rope to deeper depths of tens of metersens of meters below ground on a rope.
I had never done this before, but I observed others while waiting in line, so it was quite smooth when I did it.
It's always fun to experience something new.
When we returned, we picked up our friend who had been unwell.
He fully recovered and told us it was so nice to take a nap on the mountainside.
It was a nice day for all of us.
Yesterday's Hike
I went on a hike yesterday with several friends.
It was our first hike this autumn.
The weather was still hot, so we chose a cool trail that includinged a deep cave.
One of our friends got sunheatstroke on the way to the mountain.
I haven't seen it called sunstroke in a really long time, although that might be a regional difference. It's probably best to call it heatstroke because that should be understood by everyone, whereas some people may not be familiar with the term sunstroke at all.
Luckily, the symptoms were quite mild.
We left him in a grocery store where the owner could care for him.
It' was really extraordinary.
I have traveled to many huge caves in China, but all of them have good infrastructure.
I wouldn't use "infrastructure" here, but I'm not sure exactly what you were trying to say, so I can't offer a better alternative.
Thise cave doesidn't have electricity or a phone signal.
As a visitors, we needed to have a certificated guide with us and bring professional equipment such as headlights and hard hats.
The most interesting part was descending throughdown a rope to deeper depths of tens of meters.
I had never done this before, but I observed others while waiting in line, so it was quite smooth when I did it.
It's always fun to experience something new.
When we returned, we picked up our friend who had been unwell.
He had fully recovered and told us it was so nice to take a nap on the mountainside.
It was a nice day for all of us.
Sept. 2, 2024
Thanks for your corrections and feedback! I learned a lot from them.
Have a nice day!
One of our friends got sunheatstroke on the way to the mountain.
We left him in a grocery store where the owner couldtook care ofor him.
Your sentence is not entirely wrong but I'm assuming this is a what you meant? Please let me know if I'm wrong,
It' was really extraordinary.
If you start narrating a story in past tense, I think the whole story has to be in past tense.
As a visitor, we needed to have a certificated guide with us and bring professional equipment such as headlights and hard hats.
Same as above
He had fully recovered and told us it was so nice to take a nap on the mountainside.
Feedback
Sounds like it was so much fun. I hope your friend is able to experience it later without the heatstroke!
Sept. 1, 2024
Thank you so much!
It was really fun. I will try to make a video for this hike.
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