Yesterday's daiary

I have a morning part -time job.

I'd suggest merging this sentence with the one below. I have removed the period to allow for this.

And it is from 7:00 am to 11:00 am.

Merge this sentence with the one above.

My house is far from the job workplace.

"Job place" is not a very fluent expression. We will use "workplace" instead.

What mMy job is to washing dishes in a hotel.

Today, there awere over 100 customers.

You are writing this after your job, so the past tense should be used.

The morning food isBreakfast is served buffet style.,

"The morning food" is not a natural expression. You can just use "breakfast" instead. Alternatively: "The food in the morning is served buffet style."

So,so many dishes isare used.

(1) Merge this sentence with the one above.
(2) "Dishes" is plural, so you should use "are" instead of "is".

I went back to home.

"Go back home" is a set phrase.

I made "Ssomen" for my family.

(1) Quotation marks are not necessary around food names.
(2) "Somen" is not a proper noun, so it is not capitalised.

I watched " Finding Nemo" in English with English subtitles.

Why is his name was spelled "Nemo"?

The present tense "is" is more appropriate than the past tense "was" here, as his name being spelt "Nemo" is a general fact, rather than a single event in the past.

Of course, in English a vowel such as "e" can take on different sounds. Some words where the "e" is pronounced in a similar way to that in "Nemo" are "restart" and "lenient". I suspect the name "Nemo" was chosen because he lives in a sea anemone ("aNEMOne").

Also, in the movie there awere some strange phrases that I really didn'tdidn't really understand.

For example, " We keep our supraesophageal ganglion to ourselves!"

I believe the supraesophageal ganglion is essentially the brain of an anthropod, and it processes sensory information. I think what Mr Ray meant by this is "we keep our hands to ourselves" or "don't touch others". Perhaps "we keep our fins to ourselves" would have been more understandable, but not every character in the movie has fins.

The long, technical term is purposefully used here to portray Teacher Ray as a knowledgeable character.

by tTeacher rRay.

"Teacher Ray" is the name of a character, so it should be capitalised.

And " cCoo-coo- cachoo" by cClush.

"Coo coo cachoo" isn't a real English phrase and doesn't mean anything. It was the lyrics to a song by The Beatles, then spread to other songs as well.

I don't know theseir meanings now.

There are more than one sentence, so more than one meaning. For this reason, you should use the plural form "meanings".

Please teach me, someone!!

I made "Hhiyashi chuka".

In English, "hiyashi chuka" is spelt as two words.

I also eate noodleds (Ssomen) atfor lunch, and "Hhiyashi chuka" is also noodles.

(1) Again, mind the tense. You are writing about a past event.
(2) The phrase is "eat (something) for lunch". By extension, we also have the phrases "eat (something) for breakfast" and "eat (something) for dinner".

I was kind of fed up with noodleds today.

I stretched my body and runan for 20 minutes!

After that, I went to back to home.

Thate end!