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alisa777

Nov. 28, 2023

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Yesterday

Yesterday my two cats waked me up about 9 o`clock in the morning. They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, rubbing with their noses at my hands. It was very nice. Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sick stomach. First two hours awakening I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank water and read Telegram. Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleep. I waked up again when it was dark outside. I felt better, but I still had headache. I had dinner and went out to buy a medicine for my head and some food. Then I walked in the dark and snow about twenty minutes, weakened, returned home and fell asleep again. I waked up once more about midnight, felt better. Thereafter during the night I was listening "Alice in Wanderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep... But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking...

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Yesterday

Yesterday my two cats waoked me up abroutnd 9 o`'clock in the morning.

They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, and rubbing with their noses against my hands.

Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better than then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sickan upset stomach.

FI spent my first two hours awakening Ihours learneding Italian with Duolingo, drainking water and reading Telegram.

Then I worked a bit time and my head became sickfor a while before my head started to hurt again, so I fell awent to sleep.

I waked upWhen I awoke again when, it was dark outside.

I felt better, but I still had a headache.

I had dinner and went out to buy apain medicine for my headation and some food.

Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes, weakened,. Then, feeling weak, I returned home and fell asleep again.

I waked up once moreWhen I next woke up abroutnd midnight, I felt better.

Thereafter, during the night, I was listeninged to "Alice in Waonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamplayed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep...

But I couldn`'t, maybe because ofperhaps due to my sad thoughts and maybe due tohaving drunk two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking...

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alisa777

Nov. 29, 2023

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Thank you!

Yesterday

Yesterday my two cats waoked me up at about 9 o`'clock in the morning.

They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for carespets and cuddles, and rubbing my hands with their noses at my hands.

Or "They were purring"

Carress if for lovers, pet is for animals.

It was very nice.

Then I got up, gave food to the cats, and (rejoiced / celebrated) that I was feeling better than then day before, when I had had a hell of a(horrible / horrific / massive / killer) headache and sickan upset stomach.

I would avoid "hell of a" unless talking with close friends. It comes off as very casual and some people may find it rude.

For the first two hours awakeningfter I woke up, I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank waterm and read Telegram.

Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleepstarted to hurt again, so I (went back to sleep / took a nap).

I waoked up again when it was dark outside.

I felt better, but I still had a headache.

I had dinner and went out to buy a medicine for my head and some food.

Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes, weakened, before I got too tired and returned home andwhere I fell asleep again.

I waoked up once more at about midnight, felteling better.

Thereafter during theat night I was listening to "Alice in Waonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamplayed "Hogwarts Mystery," and tried to sleep...

"Thereafter" is very, very formal.

But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to the two cups of coffee, which I had I druank after my walking...

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alisa777

Nov. 29, 2023

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Thank you for your valuable notes!

Yesterday


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Yesterday my two cats waked me up about 9 o`clock in the morning.


Yesterday my two cats waoked me up at about 9 o`'clock in the morning.

Yesterday my two cats waoked me up abroutnd 9 o`'clock in the morning.

They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, rubbing with their noses at my hands.


They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for carespets and cuddles, and rubbing my hands with their noses at my hands.

Or "They were purring" Carress if for lovers, pet is for animals.

They were saying "pur-pur-pur", asking for caress and cuddle, and rubbing with their noses against my hands.

It was very nice.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sick stomach.


Then I got up, gave food to the cats, and (rejoiced / celebrated) that I was feeling better than then day before, when I had had a hell of a(horrible / horrific / massive / killer) headache and sickan upset stomach.

I would avoid "hell of a" unless talking with close friends. It comes off as very casual and some people may find it rude.

Then I got up, gave food to the cats and rejoiced that I was feeling better than then day before, when I had had a hell of a headache and sickan upset stomach.

First two hours awakening I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank water and read Telegram.


For the first two hours awakeningfter I woke up, I learned Italian with Duolingo, drank waterm and read Telegram.

FI spent my first two hours awakening Ihours learneding Italian with Duolingo, drainking water and reading Telegram.

Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleep.


Then I worked a bit time and my head became sick again, so I fell asleepstarted to hurt again, so I (went back to sleep / took a nap).

Then I worked a bit time and my head became sickfor a while before my head started to hurt again, so I fell awent to sleep.

I waked up again when it was dark outside.


I waoked up again when it was dark outside.

I waked upWhen I awoke again when, it was dark outside.

I felt better, but I still had headache.


I felt better, but I still had a headache.

I felt better, but I still had a headache.

I had dinner and went out to buy a medicine for my head and some food.


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I had dinner and went out to buy apain medicine for my headation and some food.

Then I walked in the dark and snow about twenty minutes, weakened, returned home and fell asleep again.


Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes, weakened, before I got too tired and returned home andwhere I fell asleep again.

Then I walked in the dark and snow for about twenty minutes, weakened,. Then, feeling weak, I returned home and fell asleep again.

I waked up once more about midnight, felt better.


I waoked up once more at about midnight, felteling better.

I waked up once moreWhen I next woke up abroutnd midnight, I felt better.

Thereafter during the night I was listening "Alice in Wanderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep...


Thereafter during theat night I was listening to "Alice in Waonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamplayed "Hogwarts Mystery," and tried to sleep...

"Thereafter" is very, very formal.

Thereafter, during the night, I was listeninged to "Alice in Waonderland" in English, made embroidery, practiced guitar, gamplayed "Hogwarts Mystery" and tried to sleep...

But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking...


But I couldn`t, maybe because of sad thoughts and maybe due to the two cups of coffee, which I had I druank after my walking...

But I couldn`'t, maybe because ofperhaps due to my sad thoughts and maybe due tohaving drunk two cups of coffee, which I had drunk after my walking...

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