May 28, 2022
Yesterday
The train I rode was late due to heavy rain yesterday.
So I got to the last minute of work, and I had to run between nearest station and my office.
I went shopping on my way home from
the office.
My cosmetics are almost to run out, I went to Mitsukoshi in Nihoｍbashi.
Mitsukoshi is one of the department store in Japan.
I sometimes like to see and buy wear and cosmetics.
Shopping like this is relieved stress, I think that I get sense of satisfaction buying more than getting.
昨日は大雨の影響で乗車した電車が遅れた。
おかげで就業時間ギリギリになってしまい、最寄り駅から会社まで走らなくてはならなかった。
帰りは買い物をして帰った。使っている化粧品の一つが無くなりそうなので、三越に寄った。
三越は日本のデパートの一つだ。
私は時々服や化粧品を見たり買いに行くのが好きだ。
こういった買い物は私にとってストレス発散になり、買ったものより、買う行為自体にとても満足感を得ている気がする。
Yesterday
The train I rode was late due to heavy rain yesterday.
So I got to work at the last minute of work, and I had to run between the nearest station and my office.
I went shopping on my way home from
the office.
My cosmetics arehad almost to run out, I went to Mitsukoshi in Nihoｍbashi.
Mitsukoshi is one of the department stores in Japan.
I sometimes like to see and, buy wear and wear cosmetics.
Shopping like this is relieveds stress, I think that I get a sense of satisfaction from buying more than from getting something new.
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Fantastic!
May 28, 2022
Thank you very much!
Yesterday
The train I rode yesterday was late due to heavy rain yesterday.
Or "the train I ride was late due to heavy rain yesterday." Which train is it? The train I rode yesterday. Which train was late due to heavy rain yesterday? The train I ride.
So I got to work at the last minute of work, and I had to run between the nearest station and my office.
I went shopping on my way home from
the office.
My cosmetics awere almosbout to run out, so I went to Mitsukoshi in Nihoｍbashi.
Mitsukoshi is one of the department stores in Japan.
It's one of many stores, so stores is plural.
I sometimes like to see and buy wearclothes and cosmetics.
You can say "sports wear" or "formal wear" to talk about those kinds of clothes, but "wear" isn't used as a noun on its own. Or you could say "wears" which means products, but it's a bit vague for this sentence.
Shopping like this is relieved stress, I think that I get sense of satisfaction from buying more than getting.
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I like buying things as well! I think buying things online is especially fun, because by the time it arrives I sometimes forget what I ordered, so it's like a surprise present for myself!
May 28, 2022
Thank you very much!
I like buying things online too.
It's wonderful idea that think a surprise present for myself!
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