June 2, 2020
Yesterday
I went out for dirnks with my middle school friends yesterday for the first time in a while. It was really fun because it has been a while since I talked with them face to face. We went to our firend's restaurant. The restaurant is very popular among locals cuz he is good at cooking and talking with people. So, the restaurant was busy even though it was Monday. Then, we went bar-crawl. I had a blast last night.
I went out for dirinks with my middle school friends yesterday for the first time in a while.
We went to our firiend's restaurant.
Then, we went on a bar- crawl.
I think that bar crawl is specific to the US, while "pub crawl" can be used in the US or in Britain.
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Ah, that sounds so fun!
June 5, 2020
Thanks!
It was really fun because it has been a while since I talked with them face to face.in
The restaurant is very popular among locals cuzbecause he is good at cooking and talking with people.
Cuz を使うのは歌詞と話すときのほうが自然です。この分の中で、まえ「Because]もう使ったので、その風に書き続けましょう。
Then, we went bar-crawlhopping.
bar-crawl は存在しないと思う。そうして、動詞だので「-ing」最後につけましょう。
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わかりやすいでした！
お疲れ様です！
June 3, 2020
日本語上手ですね！！
ありがとうございます😊
I went out for dirinks with my friends from middle school friends yesterday for the first time in a while.
If you say my "middle school friends" it sounds like you might still be in middle school.
It was really fun because it has been a while since I talked with them face to face.
We went to our firiend's restaurant.
So, the restaurant was busy even though it was Monday.
Then, we went on a bar- crawl.
I had a blast last night.
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Good job!
June 3, 2020
Thanks!
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Then, we went bar-crawl. Then, we went on a bar Then, we went bar- bar-crawl は存在しないと思う。そうして、動詞だので「-ing」最後につけましょう。 Then, we went on a bar I think that bar crawl is specific to the US, while "pub crawl" can be used in the US or in Britain. |
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I had a blast last night. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went out for dirnks with my middle school friends yesterday for the first time in a while. I went out for d If you say my "middle school friends" it sounds like you might still be in middle school. I went out for d |
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It was really fun because it has been a while since I talked with them face to face. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It was really fun because it has been a while since I talked with them |
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We went to our firend's restaurant. We went to our f We went to our f |
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The restaurant is very popular among locals cuz he is good at cooking and talking with people. The restaurant is very popular among locals Cuz を使うのは歌詞と話すときのほうが自然です。この分の中で、まえ「Because]もう使ったので、その風に書き続けましょう。 |
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So, the restaurant was busy even though it was Monday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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