Dec. 8, 2024
Year in review
At first I have no idea what it is. All I know is that everything has got in line and can’t wait to mess me up, as if I’m a human-shaped magnet which attracts unpleasant things around me as many as possible, as if I sit in a Tesla on autopilot toward every speed bump it can find in this sin city.
Despite all the odds against me through 2024 the whole year, I still live in peace and my state of mind is still in some kind of bizarre confidence. Like I said at the beginning, I have no idea what it is. But couple weeks before, I suddenly realized it. I acknowledge that I am the real-life version of Nicolas Cage in Willy’s wonderland. Boy, it finally makes sense.
Not because I haven’t been bothered by all these odds, but I keep my tunnel vision on a short-term goal where I’ve been making a go of. As a matter of fact, I’m so confident that there is no room for self-doubt in my heart. Like the old saying: there’s no spring without a winter.
“Now keep your damn head down, you’ll be all right.” Said old Henry.
Year in rReview
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“Now keep your damn head down, you’ll be all right.,” Ssaid old Henry.
Dec. 9, 2024
Thank you for revision.
Year iIn rReview
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Like I said at the beginning, I have no idea what it iwas.
But a couple of weeks before, I suddenly realized it.
I acknowledge that I am the real-life version of Nicolas Cage in Willy’s wWonderland.
Not because I haven’t been bothered by all these odds, but I keep my tunnel vision on a short-term goal where I’ve been making a go of that I believe are against me because I have not given myself the time to be bothered by this belief. I have instead been keeping my mind heavily occupied with short-term goals.
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LikeAs the old saying: goes, there’s no spring without a winter.
“Now keep your damn head down, you’ll be all right.,” Ssaid old Henry.
Feedback
Good job!
I hope 2025 will be a better year for you! There is a spiritual teaching that says, “you are the creator of your own reality. What you focus on is what you attract. The truth is, is that life is meant to be good. But if you continue to focus on a belief that life is against you, then that is what you will attract. So don't play the victim. Play the creator. Love and safety is for you because it IS you!” ❤️.
Dec. 9, 2024
Thank you for revision. It’s helpful, and your feedback is warm.
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