July 14, 2022
How is the year 3000 will be diffrent or will be notching changes . Is it it like in the movies or better maybe fly cars are real and teleportation. Or we could also all death . But possibly will be difficult and worst. A war will begin or a famine in the future have we people our ecousytem because all the new technic ruined .We would more gas and fire produce and the air dirty make maybe in the future is the whole nature in danger. Or they found a way so that we current now more need. Who know the future is not in stone but I am curious what happend in this millennium we will see . But is very sad that the human not so long live then so could we find out. But 2000 is also very good and nice but I hope we have not really long to wait .
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Year 3000
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IsWill it itbe like in the movies or better m? Maybe flying cars are real and teleportation will be real.
We use future tense, "will," because we're guessing at what could happen in the future.
Or we could also all death be dead.
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We don't need the word, "difficult," or any other adjective here with "worse."
A war will begin or a famine in the future have we people our ecousytemuture famine will occur because all of the new technicology ruined .We would more gas and fire produce and the air dirty make maybe in the future is the whole naturthe Earth. Gas and fires may pollute the air to the extent that maybe nature itself will be in danger.
I had a lot of trouble trying to figure out what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess.
Or they found a way so that we current now more needto avoid these from happening so that we can live as we currently live.
Again, I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this correction is my best guess.
Who know ts. The future is not set in stone but I a'm curious whatabout what will happend in this millennium w. We will see .
"The future is not set in stone" is a set phrase.
But it's very sad that the human not so long live then so could wes can't live long enough to find out.
But 2000 is also very good and nice but I hope we have not really long to wait .
This sentence doesn't make sense in English. I would just omit it.
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How is thewill year 3000 will be different o? Or will be notching changes .?
These are questions and require question marks (?)
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Need to use future tense, since you are talking about a future event
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But possibly it will be difficult and worse than the present.
"Worse" is the comparative form, "worst" is the superlative, not what you want here. It is also more clear in context if you state what it will be worse than.
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Need to use "could" because it is a hypothetical. Not sure what you meant by "gas" but I revised it to smoke or carbon dioxide
Or they found a way soa way will be found to need less energy thatn we current now more needdo now.
I don't really know what you meant by this, this is my interpretation
Who know ts. The future is not set in stone, but I am curious what will happend in this millennium w. We will see .
But is very sad that the humans do not solive long live then so could weenough to find out.
But 200022 is also very good and nice but I hope we have not really long to wait good time to live in.
I don't really know what you meant by this. "I hope we do not have really long to wait" - doesn't really make sense because as you just said, we won't live long enough to wait for 3000 to arrive
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Don't forget future tense and question formation.
Year 3000 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
How is the year 3000 will be diffrent or will be notching changes . How These are questions and require question marks (?) How |
Is it it like in the movies or better maybe fly cars are real and teleportation.
Need to use future tense, since you are talking about a future event
We use future tense, "will," because we're guessing at what could happen in the future. |
Or we could also all death . Or we could also all die Or we could also all |
But possibly will be difficult and worst. But possibly it will be difficult and worse than the present. "Worse" is the comparative form, "worst" is the superlative, not what you want here. It is also more clear in context if you state what it will be worse than.
We don't need the word, "difficult," or any other adjective here with "worse." |
A war will begin or a famine in the future have we people our ecousytem because all the new technic ruined .We would more gas and fire produce and the air dirty make maybe in the future is the whole nature in danger. A war Need to use "could" because it is a hypothetical. Not sure what you meant by "gas" but I revised it to smoke or carbon dioxide A war will begin or a f I had a lot of trouble trying to figure out what you were trying to say here so this is my best guess. |
Or they found a way so that we current now more need. Or I don't really know what you meant by this, this is my interpretation Or they found a way Again, I'm not sure what you're trying to say here so this correction is my best guess. |
Who know the future is not in stone but I am curious what happend in this millennium we will see . Who know Who know "The future is not set in stone" is a set phrase. |
But is very sad that the human not so long live then so could we find out. But is very sad that But it's very sad that |
But 2000 is also very good and nice but I hope we have not really long to wait . But 20 I don't really know what you meant by this. "I hope we do not have really long to wait" - doesn't really make sense because as you just said, we won't live long enough to wait for 3000 to arrive
This sentence doesn't make sense in English. I would just omit it. |
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