Ryan Trahan tested theme parks with bad reviews Ryan Trahan tested theme parks with bad reviews

Ryan Trahan tested theme parks with bad reviews Ryan Trahan tested theme parks with bad reviews

"Theme parks", not "them parks"

11 months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America with bad reviews. 11 months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America with bad reviews.

11Eleven months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America withat have bad reviews. Eleven months ago, he made a video where he tested 3 theme parks in America that have bad reviews.

We typically advise against starting a sentence with a numeric value and instead would start it with the word for the number spelled out. Here, "months" needs to be plural because there are 11 of them.

His goal is to seinvestigate the main criticizesms and to discover itf what it's said in thie reviews is reallly true or faklse. His goal is to investigate the main criticisms and discover if what is said in the reviews is really true or false.

When talking about claims, the opposite of true is false.

His goal is to see the main criticizesms and to discover it what it's said in this is realllywhether what has been said is true or faklse. His goal is to see the main criticisms and to discover whether what has been said is true or false.

"Criticize" = verb; "criticism" = noun We typically say "true" and "false" as opposites of each other.

He will approve or busted the reviews. He will approve or bust the reviews.

He will approve or bustedf or disagree with the reviews. He will approve of or disagree with the reviews.

We wouldn't really say "busted" here. You would maybe use that if you were talking about "busting a myth", but that's not quite right here.

The first parck looked pretty cool. The first park looked pretty cool.

The first parck looked pretty cool. The first park looked pretty cool.

French spelling here lol - the English version ends with "k"

It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy it with friends or family. It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy it with friends or family.

It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy with friends or family. It's not my dream theme park but I think you can have fun and enjoy with friends or family.

In this park, everything turns. In this park, everything turns.

I'm not sure what you mean by this. Does everything spin around? Or is it busy?

In this park, everything turns. In this park, everything turns.

Here, you would say "turns" instead of "turn"...but I'm not sure what you mean by this. Do the rides turn a certain way?

tThere are a lot of attractions. There are a lot of attractions.

tThere are a lot of attractions. There are a lot of attractions.

But, in fact, ithat wasn't true. But, in fact, that wasn't true.

Using "that" to refer to something said previously.

He gave the note of 5 starsa 5 star review for this theme park. He gave a 5 star review for this theme park.

He gave the note of 5 stars for this them parkis theme park 5 stars. He gave this theme park 5 stars.

The second was a theme park aroundset in the universe of theand mythologie withy of Atalantais (I'm not sure about the name). The second was a theme park set in the universe and mythology of Atlantis (I'm not sure about the name).

I'm guessing, from context, that this theme park was themed after the sunken city of Atlantis.

The second was a theme park built around the universe of the mythologie withmyth of Atalantais (I'm not sure about the name). The second was a theme park built around the myth of Atlantis (I'm not sure about the name).

I think you mean "Atlantis"...the underwater city?

I rarely go to a waterparks, so seeing this makesde me feel a bit jealous. I rarely go to waterparks, so seeing this made me feel a bit jealous.

Using past tense because this is something you saw in the past.

I rarely go to a water park, so seeing this makes me feel a bit jealous. I rarely go to a water park, so seeing this makes me feel a bit jealous.

This iIt was a huge park, and there arewas a beach, pools, and many other things. It was a huge park, and there was a beach, pools, and many other things.

This is a huge park, t. There areis a beach, pools, and many other things. This is a huge park. There is a beach, pools, and many other things.

Some people waseren't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them geot hurted. Some people weren't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them got hurt.

Plural "people" so use "were" instead. Past tense of "hurt" is just "hurt"

Some people waseren't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them get hurted. Some people weren't happy because they said that some attractions are dangerous and some of them get hurt.

Verb tense here with "wasn't" - should be "weren't" because your subject is plural ("some people") Past tense of "hurt" = "hurt"...confusing because it's the same word!

He tested almost every attractions, and he didn't get injured. He tested almost every attraction, and he didn't get injured.

He tested almost every attractions, and he didn't get injured. He tested almost every attraction, and he didn't get injured.

The third and last theme park was incredible! The third and last theme park was incredible!

The third and last park was incredible! The third and last park was incredible!

You'll want to specify here. Third and last what? Third and last park.

There were attractions where you can go really fast, untilp to 70 miles per hour. There were attractions where you can go really fast, up to 70 miles per hour.

"Until" is usually about time. When discussing other quantities, "up to" is more common.

There were attractions where you can go really fast until, about 70 miles per hour. There were attractions where you can go really fast, about 70 miles per hour.

He was terrified but he did the most fafastest attraction and he found it incredible. He was terrified but he did the fastest attraction and he found it incredible.

He was terrified but he did the most fafastest attraction and he found it incredible. He was terrified but he did the fastest attraction and he found it incredible.

We don't say "most fast", we say "fastest".

However, the food was really expensive because buying onlyjust a piece of pizza costed you 19 dollars! However, the food was really expensive because buying just a piece of pizza cost you 19 dollars!

"Just" emphasizes how unusual this is, but "only" is okay.

However, the food was really expensive because buying only a piece of pizza costed you 19 dollars! However, the food was really expensive because buying only a piece of pizza cost you 19 dollars!

Past tense of "cost" = "cost"...even more confusion!

With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a pinchgrain of salt and be careful. With this video, we can see that you have to take reviews with a grain of salt and be careful.

The expression is "with a grain of salt".

Even if some parks look not good, ithey can be really good though. Even if some parks look not good, they can be really good though.

"Some parks" is plural, so "they" instead of "it".

Even if some parks don't look not good, it can be really good tough. Even if some parks don't look good, it can be really good tough.

I hope you enjoyed reading my text. I hope you enjoyed reading my text.