Oct. 6, 2020
An embarassing moment
During an English Oral mock exam in high school, I was facing my young female teacher one on one. She gave me an examination sheet at the begining of the interview.
I was very nervous, but somehow I managed to finish my presentation.
At the end as she was looking down at a sheet on her desk, she reached out her hand, and so I shook it.
Then she burst into laughter telling me she only wanted her paper back.
She was still laughing hard when I was leaving the room.
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During an English Ooral mock exam in high school, I was facing my young female teacher one on one.
During an English oral mock exam in high school, I was facing my young female teacher one on one.
Even better: "mock oral exam"
She gave me an examination sheet at the beginning of the interview. She gave me an examination sheet at the beginning of the interview.
I was very nervous, but somehow I managed to finish my presentation.
At the end as she was looking down at a sheet on her desk, she reached out her hand, and so I shook it.
At the end as she was looking down at a sheet on her desk, she reached out her hand, so I shook it.
The "and" is not wrong, but it is unnecessary.
Then she burst into laughter, telling me she only wanted her paper back. Then she burst into laughter, telling me she only wanted her paper back.
She was still laughing hard whenas I was leaving the room.
She was still laughing hard as I was leaving the room.
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I can easily see myself doing the same thing as you. Funny story, and good writing!
Oct. 7, 2020
Hello Alan, thank you very much for your corrections and nice comment. It's super helpful!
I hope you have a great day.
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An embarassing moment |
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During an English Oral mock exam in high school, I was facing my young female teacher one on one.
During an English Even better: "mock oral exam" |
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She gave me an examination sheet at the begining of the interview. She gave me an examination sheet at the beginning of the interview. She gave me an examination sheet at the beginning of the interview. |
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I was very nervous, but somehow I managed to finish my presentation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At the end as she was looking down at a sheet on her desk, she reached out her hand, and so I shook it.
At the end as she was looking down at a sheet on her desk, she reached out her hand, The "and" is not wrong, but it is unnecessary. |
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Then she burst into laughter telling me she only wanted her paper back. Then she burst into laughter, telling me she only wanted her paper back. Then she burst into laughter, telling me she only wanted her paper back. |
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She was still laughing hard when I was leaving the room.
She was still laughing hard |
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