June 13, 2023
Daily thoughts
Today wasn't a productive day, I just procastinate but also resisted the urge to play videogames. That's why I feel it was a good day, because bit by bit I'm beating bad habits and developing good ones.
Today I was also tracking a package that I sent to a friend in Italy yesterday. He was the guy who turned on my curiosity for learning languages.
Here is 2:20 AM but I still have things on my To-Do list. I'll try to do some of them bur just until 3:30 AM because I need to sleep.
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Today wasn't a productive day,. I just procastinated but alsot least I resisted the urge to play video games.
Today wasn't a productive day. I procastinated but at least I resisted the urge to play video games.
By adding 'at least', you can feel that although you did something you didn't want (procrastinated), you also did something you did want (resisted playing).
He was the guy who turned onmade mye curiosity forus to learn languages / who made me want to try learning languages.
He was the guy who made me curious to learn languages / who made me want to try learning languages.
HereIt is 2:20 AM here but I still have things on my To-Do list.
It is 2:20 AM here but I still have things on my To-Do list.
I'll try to do some of them bur justt only until 3:30 AM because I need to sleep.
I'll try to do some of them but only until 3:30 AM because I need to sleep.
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Great writing! You used a lot of natural expressions.
June 14, 2023
Thanks for your corrections! :D
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Today wasn't a productive day, I just procastinate but also resisted the urge to play videogames.
Today wasn't a productive day By adding 'at least', you can feel that although you did something you didn't want (procrastinated), you also did something you did want (resisted playing). |
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That's why I feel it was a good day, because bit by bit I'm beating bad habits and developing good ones. |
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Today I was also tracking a package that I sent to a friend in Italy yesterday. |
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He was the guy who turned on my curiosity for learning languages.
He was the guy who |
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Here is 2:20 AM but I still have things on my To-Do list.
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I'll try to do some of them bur just until 3:30 AM because I need to sleep.
I'll try to do some of them bu |
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