Nov. 15, 2024
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "the ratio" much when you correct this entry. Thank you.
For example:
I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "how are you?" is "I'm fine. Thank you. And you?"
Probably almost all Japanese people lerned that from their Englsih textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. They claimed that the one pattern answer was not good. They wanted changes, and when you were not fine because of getting cold or something, you should not answer "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance who is a linguist at Yeal University and his wife is Japanese who used to be an international flight attendant said in his book that in business English conversations, you should always answer "I'm fine." If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, you wold be recognized as a weird person, and you would fail your business.
Everything depends on its context, background and situations.
In this entry, I discovered what the cause of the subungual hematoma on my both pinky toe nails after running a full marathon was.
I didn't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
However, I got it after I changed my socks to five-toe socks which had a highly recommendation for marathon runners in many books or websites.
The socks made my toes wider and stabilize the grip to the ground.
However, in my case the socks are the cause of pinky tows damage against the shoes' wall.
Every thing has its pros and cones.
例えば、「How are you?(お元気ですか?)」という質問(または挨拶)に対する典型的な答えは「I'm fine. Thank you. And you?(元気です。ありがとう。あなたは?)」だと学びました。おそらく、ほとんどの日本人が40〜50年前の英語の教科書からそれを学んだでしょう。
最近では、日本で活動するALT(外国語指導助手)として働くネイティブの英語話者の中には、その答えを聞くのに飽きたと話す人もいます。彼らは、そのようなワンパターンの答えは良くないと考えています。変化が欲しい、そして風邪などで元気でないときには「I'm fine」と答えるべきではないと言います。
しかし、イェール大学の言語学者であり、元国際線の客室乗務員である日本人の妻を持つヴァンス博士は著書の中で、ビジネス英会話では常に「I'm fine」と答えるべきだと述べています。もし風邪をひいたために元気でないなどと言えば、変な人だと思われ、ビジネスで失敗してしまうでしょう。
この投稿では、フルマラソンを走った後に両足の小指の爪に内出血ができた原因について発見したことについて書きました。以前はマラソンでそのようなケガをしたことはありませんでした。しかし、多くの本やウェブサイトでマラソンランナーに強く推奨されている5本指ソックスに変えた後、内出血ができました。このソックスは、指が広がり、地面をしっかりとグリップできるように安定させてくれます。しかし、私の場合は、このソックスが靴の壁に対して小指にダメージを与える原因になっていたのです。
何事も、メリットもあればデメリットもあると知るべきです。
Everything Has the Opposite Opinion orone Has a Different Opinion and Everything Has Pros &and Cones
Everyone Has a Different Opinion and Everything Has Pros and Cons
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "theyour ratio" much when a lot if you correct this entry.
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve your ratio a lot if you correct this entry.
For example: I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "how are you?"
is "I'm fine.
Thank you.
And you?"
Probably aAlmost all Japanese people probably learned that from their Englsish textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
Almost all Japanese people probably learned that from their English textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALTs (assistant language teachers) in Japan said that they'dve gotten botired tof hearing that answer.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALTs (assistant language teachers) in Japan said that they've gotten tired of hearing that answer.
They claimed that the one patternsuch a formulaic answer wais not good.
They claim that such a formulaic answer is not good.
They wanted changessay that there should be variety, and when you weare not fine because of gettingyou got a cold or something, you should not answer "I'm fine."
They say that there should be variety, and when you are not fine because you got a cold or something, you should not answer "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance who is, a linguist at Yeale University, and his wife is Japanese who used to be anife, a former international flight attendant, said in histheir book that in business English conversations, you should always answer with "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance, a linguist at Yale University, and his Japanese wife, a former international flight attendant, said in their book that in business English conversations you should always answer with "I'm fine."
If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, you would be recognizedseen as a weird person, and your business would fail your business.
If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, you would be seen as a weird person, and your business would fail.
Everything depends on its context, background, and the situations.
Everything depends on context, background, and the situation.
In this entry, I wrote about what I discovered whatregarding the cause of the subungual hematoma on my boththe nails of both of my pinky toe nails after running a full marathon was.
In this entry, I wrote about what I discovered regarding the cause of the subungual hematoma on the nails of both of my pinky toes after running a full marathon.
I didn't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
I didn't experience that injury in a marathon before.
However, I got it after I changed my socks to five-toe socks, which had aare highly recommendationed for marathon runners inby many books orand websites.
However, I got it after I changed my socks to five-toe socks, which are highly recommended for marathon runners by many books and websites.
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The socks allow toes to spread out and provide a stable grip to the ground.
However, in my case, the socks awere the cause ofcausing damage to my pinky tows damages against the shoes' wallwalls of my shoes.
However, in my case, the socks were causing damage to my piny toes against the walls of my shoes.
Every thing has its pros and cones.
Everything has its pros and cons.
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I think ALTs complain about their Japanese students answering with "I'm fine. And you?" because it sounds very unnatural when their students are always answering that way. Instead, they could answer "I'm good," "I'm doing good," "I'm OK," etc. Using the word "fine" all of the time sounds strange to English speakers.
Also, I feel like "And you?" is textbook English that's virtually never said by English native speakers in response to "How are you?". We English native speakers usually say something like, "How about you?"
Everything Has theits Opposite Opinion or Pros & Cones
Everything Has its Opposite Opinion or Pros & Cones
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "theyour ratio" muchby a lot when you correct this entry.
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "your ratio" by a lot when you correct this entry.
For example:
I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "how are you?"
I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "how are you?"
Remove for "for example". Use "for example" only when you intend on elaborating on a previous sentence with the next one, which you don't seem to be doing (if you are, I'm sorry - I didn't catch the meaning)
Probably almost all Japanese people learned that from their Englsish textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
Probably almost all Japanese people learned that from their English textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teachers) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teachers) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer.
Add "s" because the word should conjugate correctly, even when it's in parenthesis.
They claimed that the one pattern answerhrase was not good.
They claimed that one phrase was not good.
"one pattern answer" can be shortened for conciseness. Also, you can change "good" to something else - shoot your shot.
They wanted changes, and; when you were not fine because of getting cold or something, you should not just answer "I'm fine."
They wanted change; when you were not fine because of getting cold or something, you should not just answer "I'm fine."
Changes --> change (it's also a noun!)
Add a semicolon in replacement for the conjunction "and".
Add "just" because it implies that the answer that English language learners usually provide is insufficient.
However, Dr. Vance who is a linguist at Yeale University and hiswhose wife is Japanese whoand used to be an international flight attendant said in his book that in business English conversations in a business setting, you should always answer "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance who is a linguist at Yale University whose wife is Japanese and used to be an international flight attendant said in his book that in English conversations in a business setting, you should always answer "I'm fine."
If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, you would be recognizedseen as a weird person, and you would fail your business.
If you said that you were not fine because you had a cold, you would be seen as a weird person, and you would fail your business.
"Fail your business" sounds weird, what are you trying to say?
Everything depends on its context, background and situations.
I didhaven't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
I haven't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
The socks made my toes wider and stabilize thed my grip to the ground.
The socks made my toes wider and stabilized my grip to the ground.
Conjugated "stabilized" in its past tense to agree with "made" which is also past tense.
However, in my case the socks are the cause of me pinky towe's damage against the shoes's wall.
However, in my case the socks are the cause of me pinky toe's damage against the shoe's wall.
Every thing has its pros and cones.
Everything has its pros and cons.
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Very good as per usual. Try to research on other conjunctions besides "and"; you seem to overuse it. Keep up the good work!
Everything Has theIts Opposite Opinion orand Pros & Cones
Everything Has Its Opposite and Pros & Cons
COMPARE: cones → 円錐やコーンズ cons → 短所やコンズ
I’m sSorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "theyour correction ratio" much when youby correcting this entry.
Sorry for the lengthy entry, but I believe you can improve "your correction ratio" much by correcting this entry.
For example:
I learned that the typical answerresponse to the question (or greeting), "hHow are you?"
For example:
I learned that the typical response to the question (or greeting), "How are you?"
is "I'm fine. is "I'm fine.
Thank you.
And you?"
Probably almost all Japanese people learned that from their Englsish textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
Probably almost all Japanese people learned that from their English textbooks.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALTs (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALTs (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer.
They complaimned that the is response pattern answer was monot goodonous and non-communicative.
They complained that this response answer was monotonous and non-communicative.
monotonous → 退屈
They wanted changes, and when you were not fine because of getting cold or something, you should not answer "I'm fine."more variation , and have grown tired of "I'm fine" responses.
They wanted more variation , and have grown tired of "I'm fine" responses.
However, Dr. Vance who is a linguist at Ye (aYale University linguistand his wife is Japanese who used to be an international flight attendant) said in his book that in business English conversations, you should always answer "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance (aYale University linguistand his wife is Japanese who used to be an international flight attendant) said in his book that in business English conversations, you should always answer "I'm fine."
NOTE: If the person you are speaking to is honestly not knowing you, then a superficial "I'm fine" is fine. Sometimes superficial and perfunctory responses are okay when *not* speaking with genuine friends.
If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, perhaps you would be recognized as a weird person, and you would fail your business. If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, perhaps you would be recognized as a weird person, and you would fail your business.
This is an over-generalization.
Everything Has the OppositeDiffering Opinions or Pros & Cones Are Inherent to Everything
Differing Opinions or Pros & Cons Are Inherent to Everything
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "the ratio" muchgreatly when you correct this entry.
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "the ratio" greatly when you correct this entry.
People always have differing opinions on various topics. For example:
, I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "hHow are you?"
People always have differing opinions on various topics. For example, I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "How are you?"
You don’t want to lead with “for example” because it’s coming out of nowhere. Midway into a paragraph, you could use this to introduce the example of something you’ve just described.
Probably almost all40 or 50 years ago, most Japanese people probably learned that from their Englsish textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
40 or 50 years ago, most Japanese people probably learned that from their English textbooks.
I think what you wanted to say is that long ago this “dialogue” was taught to students in Japan. If so, the above is a clearer way to describe that.
Beginning with “40 to 50…” sets up that the events you’re about to describe took place routinely in the past. As originally written, it sounds like a mass event where all Japanese people learned this.
Placement of “probably” changes the meaning. “Probably almost all” is redundant as “probably” weakens the word it describes as does “almost all.” Moving it to “probably learned” adds uncertainty about whether that was taught or not at that time.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hearing that answer.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored hearing that answer.
They wanted changes, and. For example, when you weare not fine, because of getting cold or something, you should not answer, "I'm fine."
They wanted changes. For example, when you are not fine, because of getting cold or something, you should not answer, "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance, who is a linguist at Yeale University and hiswhose wife is Japanese who used to be anand a former international flight attendant, said in his book that in business English conversations, you should always answer, "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance, who is a linguist at Yale University and whose wife is Japanese and a former international flight attendant, said in his book that in business English conversations, you should always answer, "I'm fine."
If you said somethingreplied that you were not fine because you had a cold, you would be recognizconsidered as a weird person, and your business would fail your business.
If you replied that you were not fine because you had a cold, you would be considered a weird person and your business would fail.
Everything depends on its context, background(,) and situations. Everything depends on its context, background(,) and situations.
The Oxford comma is a controversial stylistic choice. I personally prefer to use it. However, some argue it’s not necessary.
In this entry, I discovered what the cause of the subungual hematomas on my both pinky toe nails after running a full marathon was.
In this entry, I discovered what the cause of the subungal hematomas on my both pinky toe nails after running a full marathon was.
I dihadn't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
I hadn't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
However, I got it after I changed my socks to five-toe socks which had awere highly recommendation for marathon runners in many books orand websites.
However, I got it after I changed my socks to five-toe socks which were highly recommendation for marathon runners in many books and websites.
The socks made my toes wider and helped stabilize their grip to the ground. The socks made my toes wider and helped stabilize their grip to the ground.
However, in my case the socks are the cause of the damage to my pinky towes damagefrom pressing against the shoes' wall.
However, in my case the socks are the cause of the damage to my pinky toes from pressing against the shoes' wall.
Every thing has its pros and cones.
Everything has its pros and cons.
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Probably almost all Japanese people lerned that from their Englsih textbooks 40 or 50 years ago.
I think what you wanted to say is that long ago this “dialogue” was taught to students in Japan. If so, the above is a clearer way to describe that. Beginning with “40 to 50…” sets up that the events you’re about to describe took place routinely in the past. As originally written, it sounds like a mass event where all Japanese people learned this. Placement of “probably” changes the meaning. “Probably almost all” is redundant as “probably” weakens the word it describes as does “almost all.” Moving it to “probably learned” adds uncertainty about whether that was taught or not at that time.
Probably almost all Japanese people learned that from their Engl
Probably almost all Japanese people learned that from their Engl
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Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer.
Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALTs (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALTs (assistant language teacher) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teachers) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. Nowadays, some native English speakers who are ALT (assistant language teachers) in Japan said that they'd gotten bored to hear that answer. Add "s" because the word should conjugate correctly, even when it's in parenthesis.
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They wanted changes, and when you were not fine because of getting cold or something, you should not answer "I'm fine."
They wanted changes
They wanted
They wanted change Changes --> change (it's also a noun!) Add a semicolon in replacement for the conjunction "and". Add "just" because it implies that the answer that English language learners usually provide is insufficient.
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However, Dr. Vance who is a linguist at Yeal University and his wife is Japanese who used to be an international flight attendant said in his book that in business English conversations, you should always answer "I'm fine."
However, Dr. Vance, who is a linguist at Y
However, Dr. Vance NOTE: If the person you are speaking to is honestly not knowing you, then a superficial "I'm fine" is fine. Sometimes superficial and perfunctory responses are okay when *not* speaking with genuine friends.
However, Dr. Vance who is a linguist at Y
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If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, you wold be recognized as a weird person, and you would fail your business.
If you If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, perhaps you would be recognized as a weird person, and you would fail your business. If you said something that you were not fine because you had a cold, perhaps you would be recognized as a weird person, and you would fail your business. This is an over-generalization.
If you said "Fail your business" sounds weird, what are you trying to say?
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Everything depends on its context, background and situations. Everything depends on its context, background(,) and situations. Everything depends on its context, background(,) and situations. The Oxford comma is a controversial stylistic choice. I personally prefer to use it. However, some argue it’s not necessary. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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In this entry, I discovered what the cause of the subungual hematoma on my both pinky toe nails after running a full marathon was.
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I didn't experienced that injury in a marathon before.
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However, I got it after I changed my socks to five-toe socks which had a highly recommendation for marathon runners in many books or websites.
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Everything Has the Opposite Opinion or Pros & Cones
Everything Has COMPARE: cones → 円錐やコーンズ cons → 短所やコンズ
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I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "the ratio" much when you correct this entry.
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "the ratio"
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve "
I’m sorry for the lengthy entry again, but I believe you can improve |
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For example: I learned that the typical answer to the question (or greeting), "how are you?"
People always have differing opinions on various topics. For example You don’t want to lead with “for example” because it’s coming out of nowhere. Midway into a paragraph, you could use this to introduce the example of something you’ve just described.
For example:
Remove for "for example". Use "for example" only when you intend on elaborating on a previous sentence with the next one, which you don't seem to be doing (if you are, I'm sorry - I didn't catch the meaning) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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is "I'm fine. is "I'm fine. is "I'm fine. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And you?" This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They claimed that the one pattern answer was not good.
They complai monotonous → 退屈
They claimed that "one pattern answer" can be shortened for conciseness. Also, you can change "good" to something else - shoot your shot.
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The socks made my toes wider and stabilize the grip to the ground. The socks made my toes wider and helped stabilize their grip to the ground. The socks made my toes wider and helped stabilize their grip to the ground.
The socks made my toes wider and stabilize Conjugated "stabilized" in its past tense to agree with "made" which is also past tense.
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However, in my case the socks are the cause of pinky tows damage against the shoes' wall.
However, in my case the socks are the cause of the damage to my pinky to
However, in my case the socks are the cause of me pinky to
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