Nov. 25, 2020
A Joke
Kanye West entered the 2020 US presidential election. His affiliation was Birthday Party. He put double meanings on "party". One is a celebration and another one is a political party. Therefore, I think if it is translated into Japanese, the name will be "誕生日おめで党". A political party is "党(とう)" in Japanese, and 誕生日おめでとう is "Happy Birthday" in English.
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A Joke
Kanye West entered the 2020 US presidential election.
His affiliation was the "Birthday Party." His affiliation was the "Birthday Party."
He put double meaningsmade a pun on "party".
He made a pun on "party".
Your sentence is correct, but I just thought it sounded less fluent.
One is a celebration and another one is a political party.
Therefore, I think if it is translated into Japanese, the name will be "誕生日おめで党".
A political party is "党(とう)" in Japanese, and 誕生日おめでとう is "Happy Birthday" in English.
Feedback
Excellent post! I think I could have left it without any corrections, but I just made some tweaks to make it a bit more native sounding. You've also successfully translated a joke into another language, which is an extremely hard translation to do usually, so good job!
Nov. 26, 2020
Thank you! I'm happy to hear that.
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A Joke This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Kanye West entered the 2020 US presidential election. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His affiliation was Birthday Party. His affiliation was the "Birthday Party." His affiliation was the "Birthday Party." |
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He put double meanings on "party".
He Your sentence is correct, but I just thought it sounded less fluent. |
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One is a celebration and another one is a political party. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, I think if it is translated into Japanese, the name will be "誕生日おめで党". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A political party is "党(とう)" in Japanese, and 誕生日おめでとう is "Happy Birthday" in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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