Nov. 9, 2022
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I'm aiming for the American English dialect.
Whenever I think in breathing I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Breathing is something that accompanies you since you're alive until you die.
In school, teachers taught us numbers, letters, etc. But breeathing didn't had that importance.
When we are angry our breathing changes, the same as when we are sad, happy, etc. So, if we control our breathing we can control our emotions and in consequence we are able to face any situation in life.
The point is focusing on the root, not on the leafs of the problem.
Then, what's the correct way of breathing?
I've heard from psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8.
Let's try!
Inhaling for four times.
Retaining the air for seven times.
And finally, exhaling for eight times.
And remember: the slower and the deeper, the better.
It's important to do it slow so that you activate the vagus nerve.
So, if you're having a hard moment or feeling angry just breathe in this way for a few minutes and you'll see how your emotion changes.
Thanks for reading!
Have a nice day.
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Hello!
Thank you for correcting me :)
I hope you find this information useful.
I'm aiming for the American English dialect.
Whenever I think inof breathing I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Breathing is something that accompanies you since you're alive until you die.
Whenever I think of breathing I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Breathing is something that accompanies you since you're alive until you die.
“Whenever I think of you, my heart speeds up.”
“Whenever I think of last year, I feel sad.”
In school, teachers taught us numbers, letters, etc.
But breeathing didn't seem to hadve thate same importance.
But breathing didn't seem to have the same importance.
When we are angry our breathing rate changes, the same ais also happens when we are sad, happy, etc.
When we are angry our breathing rate changes, this also happens when we are sad, happy, etc.
So, if we control our breathing, we can control our emotions and. Thus, in consequence, we are able to face any situation in lifeor challenge in our lives.
So, if we control our breathing, we can control our emotions. Thus, in consequence, we are able to face any situation or challenge in our lives.
“We should try to look for changes we can make in our lives.”
When addressing the audience in this inclusive way as you have (you are writing reflectively/persuasively to us), you must use the plural “our lives”, this is both natural and good stylistically!
The point is we must focusing on the root, not on the leafs of the problem of our problems and not on the leaves themselves.
The point is we must focus on the root of our problems and not on the leaves themselves.
Then, what's the correct way tof breathinge?
Then, what's the correct way to breathe?
I've heard from a psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8.
I heard from a psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8.
Let's try!
Inhaling for four times.
Retaining the air for seven times.
And finally, exhaling for eight times.
And remember: the slower and the deeper, the better.
It's important to do it slow so that you activate the vagus nerve.
So, if you're having a hard moment or feeling angry just breathe in this way for a few minutes and you'll see howthat your emotions have changesd and calmed.
So, if you're having a hard moment or feeling angry just breathe in this way for a few minutes and you'll see that your emotions have changed and calmed.
Thanks for reading!
Have a nice day.
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Well done!
I'm aiming for thean American English dialecaccent.
I'm aiming for an American English accent.
Americans usually call dialects 'accents' in general. When speaking of forgien languages different dialects with-in a region: in Latin America there is mexican spanish, we then call it a dialect.
Whenever I think in brewhile meditathing, I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Bbreathing is something that accompanies you sionce you're alive and until you die.
Whenever I think while meditating, I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": breathing is something that accompanies you once you're alive and until you die.
Meditating is an act of being concious about your being and breathing.
In school, teachers taught us numbers, letters, and etc.
In school, teachers taught us numbers, letters and etc.
But breeathing didn't had that importancewas not a priority.
But breathing was not a priority.
Could also use, "wasn't as important." I used priority because it comes off as a stronger way of saying it's not important at all.
When we are angry our breathing changes, and it's the same asfor when we are sad, happy, etc.
When we are angry our breathing changes and it's the same for when we are sad, happy, etc.
So, if we control our breathing we can control our emotions and in consequence we ar, then we would be able to face any situation in life.
So, if we control our breathing we can control our emotions, then we would be able to face any situation in life.
Consequence is used for negative side effects.
I've heard from a psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8. I've heard from a psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8.
Inhalinge for four times.
Inhale for four.
Retaining the airHold it for seven times.
Hold it for seven.
And finally, exhalinge for eight times.
And finally, exhale for eight.
And remember: the slower and the deeper, the better.
And remember: the slower and deeper, the better.
So, if you're having a harddifficult moment or feeling angry just breathe inlike this way for a few minutes and you'll see how your emotions changes.
So, if you're having a difficult moment or feeling angry just breathe like this for a few minutes and you'll see how your emotions change.
Whenever I think inof breathing I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Breathing is something that accompanies you since you're alivefrom when you are born until you die.
Whenever I think of breathing I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Breathing is something that accompanies you from when you are born until you die.
But breeathing didn't hadve that importance.
But breeathing didn't have that importance.
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I'm aiming for the American English dialect.
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Whenever I think in breathing I remember what I read in "Think Like a Monk": Breathing is something that accompanies you since you're alive until you die.
Whenever I think
Whenever I think Meditating is an act of being concious about your being and breathing.
Whenever I think “Whenever I think of you, my heart speeds up.” “Whenever I think of last year, I feel sad.” |
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But breeathing didn't had that importance.
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When we are angry our breathing changes, the same as when we are sad, happy, etc.
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So, if we control our breathing we can control our emotions and in consequence we are able to face any situation in life.
So, if we control our breathing we can control our emotions Consequence is used for negative side effects.
So, if we control our breathing, we can control our emotions “We should try to look for changes we can make in our lives.” When addressing the audience in this inclusive way as you have (you are writing reflectively/persuasively to us), you must use the plural “our lives”, this is both natural and good stylistically! |
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The point is focusing on the root, not on the leafs of the problem.
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Then, what's the correct way of breathing?
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I've heard from psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8. I've heard from a psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8. I've heard from a psychologist that one of the better ways to breath is counting 4,7,8.
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Inhaling for four times.
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Retaining the air for seven times.
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And finally, exhaling for eight times.
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And remember: the slower and the deeper, the better.
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It's important to do it slow so that you activate the vagus nerve. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, if you're having a hard moment or feeling angry just breathe in this way for a few minutes and you'll see how your emotion changes.
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