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Assignment 2: Meanwhile.

Hello! I hope you're doing well :)

Thank you for always correcting me.

Today I'm doing a assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.

Instructions:

The theft occurred between 6 pm and 8pm. What were you doing when the thieved were stealing your neighbor's house? Mention three consecutive activities. Use first, after that and then

First I took a shower

After that I brushed my teeth.

Then I studied phisics.


Who do you live with? What were they doing before, during and after the theft? Mention three persons and two activities of each one.

I live with my mom, my brother and my grandmother.

Before the theft, my grandmother was watching the TV.
During the theft she searched some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.
After the theft she sleeped for a while.

My brother was playing videogames before the theft.
During the theft he did some exercise.
After the theft he maked coffe.

My mom went shopping before the theft.
My mom was cooking when the theft was occuring.
My mom was taking a shower after the theft.

Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbor

Did you lost something important?

Is your house in disorder?

How do you feel about this theft?

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Assignment 2: Meanwhile.

Hello!

I hope you're doing well :)

Today I'm doing a assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.

Instructions:

Mention three consecutive activities.

Use first, after that and then

First I took a shower

After that I brushed my teeth.

Who do you live with?

What were they doing before, during and after the theft?

Mention three persons and two activities of each one.

I live with my mom, my brother and my grandmother.

My brother was playing videogames before the theft.

My mom went shopping before the theft.

My mom was taking a shower after the theft.

Is your house in disorder?

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What were you doing when the thieveds were stealing from your neighbor's house?

“She was stealing from the store.”
“He was stealing from his sister.”

Australian/British: neighbours (from now on I am going to assume you are aiming for an America dialect)

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During the theft he didwas doing some exercise.

More natural.

Estaba hacer ejercicio - he was doing exercise

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Is your house in disorder?

This doesn't sound natural. I think you were trying to say, "Is your house messy?" But please reply with what you might have wanted to say.

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Instructions:


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Use first, after that and then


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First I took a shower


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Assignment 2: Meanwhile.


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Hello!


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I hope you're doing well :)


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Thank you for always correcting me.


Thank you for always correcting me. Thank you for correcting me.

Always implies it is the same correctors, you are making a general entry to the public, english users never usually make this assumption, this would only be said naturally to a particular person e.g. you’re just sending your journals to one person in particular.

Today I'm doing a assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.


Today I'm doing an assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it. Today I'm doing an assignment where I need to imagine that my neighbour was robbed and then answer some questions about it.

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The theft occurred between 6 pm and 8pm.


The theft occurred between 6 pm and 8 pm. The theft occurred between 6 pm and 8 pm.

What were you doing when the thieved were stealing your neighbor's house?


What were you doing when the thieveds were stealing your neighbour's house? What were you doing when the thieves were in your neighbour's house?

"Neighbour" has an extra "u" in Canadian, British, and Australian English. If you are aiming to use American English, then ignore this spelling correction.

What were you doing when the thieved weref was stealing your neighbor's house? What were you doing when the thief was stealing your neighbor's house?

What were you doing when the thieveds were stealing from your neighbor's house? What were you doing when the thieves were stealing from your neighbor's house?

“She was stealing from the store.” “He was stealing from his sister.” Australian/British: neighbours (from now on I am going to assume you are aiming for an America dialect)

Mention three consecutive activities.


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After that I brushed my teeth.


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Then I studied phisics.


Then I studied phiysics. Then I studied physics.

Then I studied phiysics. Then I studied physics.

Then I studied phiysics. Then I studied physics.

Who do you live with?


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What were they doing before, during and after the theft?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Mention three persons and two activities of each one.


Mention three persons and two activities ofor each one. Mention three persons and two activities for each one.

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I live with my mom, my brother and my grandmother.


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Before the theft, my grandmother was watching the TV.


Before the theft, my grandmother was watching the TV. Before the theft, my grandmother was watching TV.

Before the theft, my grandmother was watching theTV / was watching a program on TV. Before the theft, my grandmother was watching TV / was watching a program on TV.

During the theft she searched some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.


During the theft, she searched for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet. During the theft, she searched for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.

During the theft, she was searcheding for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet. During the theft, she was searching for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.

During the theft she was searcheding for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet. During the theft she was searching for some chocolates in the kitchen cabinet.

“Ella fue a buscar” “She was searching”. In English, with regards to a specific object, we always say “searching for”: ‘She was searching/looking for her dog.’

After the theft she sleeped for a while.


After the theft, she sleepedpt for a while. After the theft, she slept for a while.

After the theft, she sleepedpt for a while. After the theft, she slept for a while.

After the theft she sleepedpt for a little while. After the theft she slept for a little while.

Dormí - she it he slept

My brother was playing videogames before the theft.


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During the theft he did some exercise.


During the theft, he did some exercise. During the theft, he did some exercise.

During the theft, he didwas doing some exercise. During the theft, he was doing some exercise.

your sentence, although not grammatically wrong, would be better this way.

During the theft he didwas doing some exercise. During the theft he was doing some exercise.

More natural. Estaba hacer ejercicio - he was doing exercise

After the theft he maked coffe.


After the theft, he makede coffee. After the theft, he made coffee.

After the theft he makede coffee. After the theft he made coffee.

After the theft he makedde some coffee. After the theft he made some coffee.

My mom went shopping before the theft.


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My mom was cooking when the theft was occuring.


My mom was cooking whilen the theft was occurring. My mom was cooking while the theft was occurring.

My mom was cooking when the theft was occurring./when the theft occurred. My mom was cooking when the theft was occurring/when the theft occurred.

My mom was taking a shower after the theft.


My mom was takingtook a shower after the theft. My mom took a shower after the theft.

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Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbor


Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbour Write three questions that you would ask your neighbour

Write three questions that you would ask to your neighbor Write three questions that you would ask your neighbor

Did you lost something important?


Did you loste something important? Did you lose something important?

Did you loste something important? Did you lose something important?

Did you loste something important? Did you lose something important?

Is your house in disorder?


Is your house in disorder? Is your house in disorder?

This doesn't sound natural. I think you were trying to say, "Is your house messy?" But please reply with what you might have wanted to say.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

How do you feel about this theft?


How do you feel about this theft? How do you feel about this theft?

You could also say, "How did you feel about this theft?" if you wanted to know what they were feeling during the event.

How do you feel about thise theft? How do you feel about the theft?

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