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Should we eat less rice ?

Today, I listened to a podcast about rice. Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia. Roughly 56% of the population eat rice as a staple. Si, approximatively 4 billions people eat rice every week. But, rice s very thirsty. For 1 Kg of rice, we consumed between 3 and 5 thousand litters. It's a huge number! So, people created an association fighting against the high consume of water called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying). It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cycles for farmers to flood their crops. But, with their invention which detect the level of water, it needs only 20 cycles. Thanks for reading !

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Today, I listened to a podcast about rice.

Roughly 56% of the population eat rice as a staple.

It's a huge number!

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Oct. 11, 2025

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Today, I listened to a podcast about rice.

Roughly 56% of the population eat rice as a staple.

It's a huge number!

But, with their invention which detect the level of water, it needs only 20 cycles.

Thanks for reading !

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Solen

Oct. 11, 2025

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Si, approximatively 4 billions people eat rice every week.


Sio, approximatively 4 billions people eat rice every week. So, approximately 4 billion people eat rice every week.

Si, aApproximatively 4 billions people eat rice every week. Approximately 4 billion people eat rice every week.

Si?

But, with their invention which detect the level of water, it needs only 20 cycles.


Bbut, with their invention whichof the AWC can detect the level of water, it needsrequiring only 20 cycles. but the invention of the AWC can detect the level of water, requiring only 20 cycles.

I feel the logic flows better with this small edit

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Thanks for reading !


Thanks for reading ! Thanks for reading!

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Today, I listened to a podcast about rice.


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Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia.


Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia. Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in Asia.

North-South isn't a direction (they are two opposites). We can just simplify to Asia here

Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia. Rice is a staple in many countries, especially in South Asia and North-South Asia.

North-South Asia or North Asia?

Roughly 56% of the population eat rice as a staple.


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But, rice s very thirsty.


But, rice s vrequires a lot of watery thirstyo grow. But rice requires a lot of water to grow.

"Thirsty" is reserved for animals (like hungry). Using the word for a plant would be considered a stylistic choice, like you are purposely humanizing the plant

But, rice s very thirstyloves water. But, rice loves water.

For 1 Kg of rice, we consumed between 3 and 5 thousand litters.


For every 1 Kkg of rice, we consumed between 3 and 5 thousand litters are consumed. For every 1 kg of rice, between 3 and 5 thousand liters are consumed.

A bit more natural

For 1 Kkg of rice, we consumed between 3 and 5 thousand lit000-5000 litres of waters. For 1 kg of rice, we consumed between 3000-5000 litres of water.

It's a huge number!


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So, people created an association fighting against the high consume of water called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying).


So, some people created an association to fighting against the high consumeption of water, called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying). So, some people created an association to fight against the high consumption of water, called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying).

Verb = to consume Noun = consumption

So, people created an association fighting against the high consumeption of water called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying). So, people created an association fighting against the high consumption of water called the AWC (Alternate Wet Drying).

It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cycles for farmers to flood their crops.


It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cyclesgrow rice using less water. Normally, 25 cycles are needed for farmers to flood their crops., It aims to grow rice using less water. Normally, 25 cycles are needed for farmers to flood their crops,

It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cycles for farmers to flood their crops. It aims to consume less water because normally, it needs 25 cycles for farmers to flood their crops.

25 cycles? I don't get it.

Should we eat less rice ?


Should we eat less rice ? Should we eat less rice?

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