Are there more natural ways to say the linsentences below? Are there more natural ways to say the sentences below?

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not the way you would find insound like a textbook. I'd like to speak English more naturally and not sound like a textbook.

i like this correction the best so far.

It's alright even if you even change an entire sentence!! It's alright even if you change an entire sentence!!

I think the most famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme. I think the most famous donut shop in Japan is Mister Donut or Krispy Kreme.

わー！本当ですか。日本に行った時は、Krispy Kremeを見たことがありません。

Which one do you prefer? Which one do you prefer?

But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and (I would choose) Misster Donut when I want a regular donut. But if I were to buy one myself, I would choose Krispy Kreme when I want something rich and filling, and (I would choose) Mister Donut when I want a regular donut.

I moreusually get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme. I usually get Misdo because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme.

I more get Misdo more because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme does. I get Misdo more because they have more stores in Japan than Krispy Kreme does.