Sharing bike Bike sharing Bike sharing

Sharing bBike s Sharing Bikes

Capitalize important words in title. Use plural (bikes) for general case.

Because I lost my bike, I rode a hello sharing bike instead. Because I lost my bike, I rode a hello sharing bike instead.

Needs an indefinite article.

Because I recently lost my bike, I rode hhave been using Hello sSharing bBike instead. Because I recently lost my bike, I have been using Hello Sharing Bike instead.

There are many bike sharing stations on streets in our city, but most of them are electric bikes. There are many bike sharing stations on streets in our city, but most of them are electric bikes.

There are many bike sharinges on streets in our city, but most of them are electric bikes. There are many bike shares on streets in our city, but most of them are electric bikes.

"bike sharing" is an activity. "bike shares" will read as a noun.

There are many bike sharing onprograms on the streets in our city, but most of them areoffer electric bikes. There are many bike sharing programs on the streets in our city, but most of them offer electric bikes.

Because my goal of riding a bike is to exercise my body, I doidn’t choose an electric one. Because my goal of riding a bike is to exercise my body, I didn’t choose an electric one.

Past tense, "didn't choose"

Because my goal ofin riding a bike is to exercise my body, I don’t choose anthe electric ones. Because my goal in riding a bike is to exercise my body, I don’t choose the electric ones.

BecausSince my goal of riding a bike is to exercise my bodyore, I don’t chooswant to ride an electric one. Since my goal is to exercise more, I don’t want to ride an electric one.

It seemed tThere were only two bikes without electric power. There were only two bikes without electric power.

It seemed there were only two bikes without non-electric powerbikes. It seemed there were only two non-electric bikes.

It seemed there were only two bikes without electric powermanual bikes, so I just picked one of them. It seemed there were only two manual bikes, so I just picked one of them.

I combined this sentence with the next.

I chose one of them at random.

The distance of the first ride was about seven or eight kilometers away and I was so happy about the ride. The distance of the first ride was about seven or eight kilometers and I was so happy about the ride.

It was very light and fast and it took only more than twenty minutes to arrive. It was very light and fast and it took only more than twenty minutes to arrive.

Based on this sentence I'm not sure if it took more than or less than 20 minutes to arrive. Based on the positive tone of the sentence I would rewrite this as: It was very light and fast and only took about twenty minutes to arrive.

It was very light and fast and it took only a bit more than twenty minutes to arrive. It was very light and fast and it took only a bit more than twenty minutes to arrive.

only a bit more than, only a bit longer than, a little more than... all of these would work.

It was very light and fast and i. It took only more thanjust over twenty minutes to arrive. It was very light and fast. It took just over twenty minutes to arrive.

Avoid using too many "and"

It was very lighteasy and fast and it took me only a little more than twenty minutes to arrive. It was very easy and fast and took me only a little more than twenty minutes.

TFor the second ride I still chose this one (other people prefer electric bikes, so, it was still there) and the ride still felt so good. For the second ride I still chose this one (other people prefer electric bikes, so, it was still there) and the ride still felt so good.

The second ride I still chose this one again (other people prefer electric bikes, so, it was still there) and the ride still felt so good. The second ride I chose this one again (other people prefer electric bikes, so it was still there) and the ride still felt so good.

TFor the second ride, I still chose this one same bike (other people prefer electric bikes, so, it was still there) and t. The ride still felt so good. For the second ride, I chose the same bike (other people prefer electric bikes, so it was still there). The ride still felt so good.

The second ride I still chose this one (other people prefer electric bikes, so, it was still there)chose another manual bike for my second ride and the ride still felt so good. The chose another manual bike for my second ride and the ride still felt so good.

So I decided that before my new bike arrived, I would ride this one wherever I go. I decided that before my new bike arrived, I would ride this one wherever I go.

So I decided that before my new bike arriveds, I wouldill ride this one wherever I go. So I decided that before my new bike arrives, I will ride this one wherever I go.

So I have decided that before my new bike arriveds, I would ride this onesecond bike I rented wherever I go. So I have decided that before my new bike arrives, I would ride this second bike I rented wherever I go.

This is the happiest thing to happen since I lost my bike, so, I wrote it down. This is the happiest thing to happen since I lost my bike, so I wrote it down.

This is the happiest thing that has happened to me since I lost my bike, so, I wrote it down. This is the happiest thing that has happened to me since I lost my bike, so I wrote it down.

This is the happiest thing since I lost my bike, so, I'm wroteiting it down. This is the happiest thing since I lost my bike, so I'm writing it down.