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Ichibanya opens first outlet in India

https://www.japantimes.co.jp/news/2020/08/03/business/corporate-business/japan-curry-ichibanya-india/


When I saw this title, I did confuse a little.

I mean no offensive, I like there curry.

Even in Hong Kong I will go to their shop to have lunch.

Some people may found their curry is not too spicy.

Anyway, to me I sometime will think India equal curry.

Or, if you talking about India food, curry is iconic food.

They should be the master of curry.

So, open a curry restaurant in India.

To me that is a very risky attempt.

Anyway, I may be wrong.

Hope they become popular in India.

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https://www.japantimes.co.jp/news/2020/08/03/business/corporate-business/japan-curry-ichibanya-india/

Anyway, I may be wrong.

Ichibanya opens first outlet in India


Ichibanya opens its first outlet in India Ichibanya opens its first outlet in India

https://www.japantimes.co.jp/news/2020/08/03/business/corporate-business/japan-curry-ichibanya-india/


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When I saw this title, I did confuse a little.


When I saw this title, I did confuse a littlewas a little confused. When I saw this title, I was a little confused.

I mean no offensive, I like there curry.


I mean no offensive, I like theire curry. I mean no offense, I like their curry.

There = at a place Their = belongs to someone

Even in Hong Kong I will go to their shop to have lunch.


Even in Hong Kong, I will go to their shop to have lunch. Even in Hong Kong, I will go to their shop to have lunch.

Some people may found their curry is not too spicy.


Some people may foundind that their curry is not too spicy. Some people may find that their curry is not too spicy.

Anyway, to me I sometime will think India equal curry.


Anyway, tofor me, I sometime wills think that India equals curry. Anyway, for me, I sometimes think that India equals curry.

Or, if you talking about India food, curry is iconic food.


OrAs in, if you talking about Indian food, curry is an iconic fooddish. As in, if you talking about Indian food, curry is an iconic dish.

"Iconic food" is not wrong, but changing it to dish sounds better, to avoid repetition.

They should be the master of curry.


They should be known as the masters of curry. They should be known as the masters of curry.

You could also say, if you are sure they are the masters of curry: "They are known as the masters of curry."

So, open a curry restaurant in India.


So, Ichibanya opening a curry restaurant in India is surprising. So, Ichibanya opening a curry restaurant in India is surprising.

This sentence needed more information for what you were talking about.

To me that is a very risky attempt.


To me, that is a very risky attemptventure. To me, that is a very risky venture.

Anyway, I may be wrong.


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Hope they become popular in India.


However, I hope they become popular in India. However, I hope they become popular in India.

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