Sept. 9, 2025
Moses
I read the story of Moses and the parting of the Red Sea.
Moses was an Israelite who was born in Egypt and grew up in the palace of Pharaoh.
Moses was the leader of the Israelites.
During his escape, Moses prayed before the Red Sea.
God parted the Red Sea so that the Israelites could pass through safely.
Subsequently, the sea swept away the Egyptian army.
That is how God rescued the Israelites from the hand of the Egyptians.
He led the Israelites out of Egypt and to the Promised Land of Canaan.
However, Moses was not allowed to enter Canaan until his death.
我读了摩西和红海的故事。
摩西是以色列人，出生在埃及，在法老的宫殿里长大。
摩西是以色列人的领袖。
在逃离过程中，摩西在红海前祈祷。
神使红海分开，使以色列人安全通过。
随后海水淹没了埃及军队。
神就是这样救以色列人脱离埃及人的手。
他带领以色列人逃离埃及，前往迦南应许之地。
然而摩西死之前都没能进入迦南。
Moses
I recently read the story of Moses and the parting of the Red Sea.
I'm assuming this is past tense.
I read (past tense) sounds better if you specify when, eg. recently, yesterday, last night, etc
I read (present tense) ALSO sounds better if you specify when, eg. sometimes I read xyz, I read every night, etc
Moses was an Israelite who was born in Egypt and grew up in the palace of the Pharaoh.
Moses was the leader of the Israelites.
During his escape, Moses prayed before the Red Sea.
God parted the Red Sea so that the Israelites could pass through safely.
SubsequentlyAfter the Israelites were safe, the sea swept away the Egyptian army.
Subsequently DOES mean "after that", but I think being more specific would sound better here.
That is how God rescued the Israelites from the hands of the Egyptians.
He led the Israelites out of Egypt and to the Promised Land of Canaan.
However, Moses was not allowed to enter Canaan until his death.
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Moses was an Israelite who was born in Egypt and grew up in the palace of Pharaoh. Moses was an Israelite who was born in Egypt and grew up in the palace of the Pharaoh. |
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Moses was the leader of the Israelites. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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During his escape, Moses prayed before the Red Sea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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God parted the Red Sea so that the Israelites could pass through safely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Subsequently, the sea swept away the Egyptian army.
Subsequently DOES mean "after that", but I think being more specific would sound better here. |
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That is how God rescued the Israelites from the hand of the Egyptians. That is how God rescued the Israelites from the hands of the Egyptians. |
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He led the Israelites out of Egypt and to the Promised Land of Canaan. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, Moses was not allowed to enter Canaan until his death. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moses This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I read the story of Moses and the parting of the Red Sea. I recently read the story of Moses and the parting of the Red Sea. I'm assuming this is past tense. I read (past tense) sounds better if you specify when, eg. recently, yesterday, last night, etc I read (present tense) ALSO sounds better if you specify when, eg. sometimes I read xyz, I read every night, etc |
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