I acceptreceived an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up. I received an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up.

I acceptWhen I woke up, I received an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status when I woke up. When I woke up, I received an email saying that my dream school had updated my application status.

I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hands wasere shaking. I was nervous when I clicked the link to the status page in the email, and my hands were shaking.

Usually we talk about both hands shaking at the same time

Suddenly, a big Rred CrossX popped up, and I was shocked. Suddenly, a big red X popped up, and I was shocked.

I'm guessing the cross is an X?

However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university has accepted me, and that this red cross iwas a sign to remind me that I needed to update some documents to get an I-20 visa. However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university has accepted me, and that this red cross was a sign to remind me that I needed to update some documents to get an I-20 visa.

You wrote the beginning of the sentence in the past tense, and the end in the present.

However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university accepted me, and this red cross is a signX is to remind me that I need to update some documents to get an I-20 visa. However, when I calmed down and read the page carefully, I found that the university accepted me, and this red X is to remind me that I need to update some documents to get an I-20 visa.

I burst out screaming and laughing. OMG! I burst out screaming and laughing. OMG!

New York, here I come! New York, here I come!

or "New York, I'm coming!"

New York, here I come! New York, here I come!