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March 26, 2023

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I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for next plan.
I was lost in abundant data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.
In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and hesitating.
Hopefully, I will be more efficient this afternoon.
Perhaps, I should have a big picture in mind first and find materials as fast as possible.

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I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for next plan.

Hopefully, I will be more efficient this afternoon.

Perhaps, I should have a big picture in mind first and find materials as fast as possible.

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echoooo

March 26, 2023

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I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for next plan.


I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for the next plan. I was assigned a task to analyze the business performance of one product and provide some insights for the next plan.

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I was lost in abundant data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.


I was lost in abundantexcessive data and could not figure out how to construct a framework. I was lost in excessive data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.

abundant means 'more than enough' since context here is 'too much' excessive is better

I was lost in abundantthe quantity data and could not figure out how to construct a framework. I was lost in the quantity data and could not figure out how to construct a framework.

I would only use abundant in a positive meaning.

In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and hesitating.


In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and hesitatingsecond guessing myself. In the end, I constructed the framework, but I still spent too much time analyzing data and second guessing myself.

Your original sentence made sense but if you wanted to sounds more like a native speaker "second guessing myself" would be appropriate.

Hopefully, I will be more efficient this afternoon.


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Perhaps, I should have a big picture in mind first and find materials as fast as possible.


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