I went ridingrode a bike to Auntie De's house tonight. I rode a bike to Auntie De's house tonight.

I went to the farmlandields with her and took a lot of pictures. I went to the fields with her and took a lot of pictures.

Can't explain why but "farmland" is a little weird here.

The rice has growngrew much taller and greener than before. The rice grew much taller and greener than before.

I havewas in a good mood whenas I was walking ilked down the dusty path among the rice plants. I was in a good mood as I walked down the dusty path among the rice plants.

I havewas in a good mood when I was walking inalong the dust path among the rice. I was in a good mood when I was walking along the dust path among the rice.

The sun was setting fastquickly. The sun was setting quickly.

a very common mistake. Fast is an adjective, quickly is an adverb.

Meanwhile, tThe clouds were very beautiful, with a variety of shapes and colors. The clouds were very beautiful, with a variety of shapes and colors.

A more natural sentence would connect to the previous one: "The sun was setting fast, and the clouds..."

Meanwhile, the clouds were very beautiful with a variety of shapes and colors. Meanwhile, the clouds were very beautiful with a variety of shapes and colors.

When I was havinghad dinner with her family, we chatted a lot. When I had dinner with her family, we chatted a lot.

Sometimes I realized that I regarded her as my mother while; I didn't like my own mother. I realized that I regarded her as my mother; I didn't like my own mother.

Most likely you need to indicate that these two statements are related. "I realized that because I didn't like my own mother, I often regarded her as my mother instead."

When I was ridingrode back home, I watched the sky from time to time. When I rode back home, I watched the sky from time to time.

The sky was dark blue, so the light was sovery obvious. The sky was dark blue, so the light was very obvious.

Obvious is not the right word here, you could probably say something like "the light was vivid/brilliant/especially bright"

There were also stars appeared in the blue sky. There were also stars in the blue sky.

There were also stars appeareding in the blue sky. There were also stars appearing in the blue sky.

I hope I will be able to one day. I hope I will be able to one day.

I hope I will one day. I hope I will one day.

I saw a few fireflies aton the country road, they were twinkling and twinkling. I saw a few fireflies on the country road, they were twinkling and twinkling.

I saw a few fireflies atlong the country road, they were twinkling and twinkling. I saw a few fireflies along the country road, they were twinkling and twinkling.

When I wasgot back, I looked up the sky, and there were so many stars shining in the blue sky. When I got back, I looked up the sky, and there were so many stars shining in the blue sky.

When I was back, I looked up at the sky, there were so many stars shining in the blue sky. When I was back, I looked up at the sky, there were so many stars shining in the blue sky.