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Even better, using title case: The Walking Dead

This March, I started a new tv series called ‘"The wWalking dDead’". This March, I started a new tv series called "The Walking Dead".

The names of books, movies, TV shows, etc are usually capitalised. Use quotation marks (" ") not apostrophes (' ') here.

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They're not MY wife and children --> HIS wife and HIS child, here I'd still use present tense for recounting the story Research = scientific research, like reading academic journals, doing experiments in labs, testing things Search = to look for someone/something Find = when you succeed in your search, you FIND the thing you were looking for

In this show, Rick Grimes have changed yours his personality. In this show, Rick Grimes changes his personality.

It's HIS personality, not the readers

He ledads his group in a factory, then in a prison, ectc. He leads his group in a factory, then in a prison, etc.

It has eleven seasons and maybe two or three spin offs, which showall tell the story aboutof the two main character of the tv series. It has eleven seasons and maybe two or three spin offs, which all tell the story of the two main characters.

Add an "s" to the end of plural words --> seasonS and spin offS You usually "tell" a story The ending is a bit redundant, so I removed it to make the sentence sound a bit better/more natural It would be even better if you specified the names of the two main characters at the end of your sentence, eg. "... which all tell the story of the two main characters, x and y." If there are DIFFERENT main characters for each show, then I'd phrase it as: "... which all focus on two main characters" (no "the" here) and then maybe specify the names of these characters for each show.

HAt the start of the series, he woakes up in a hospital because few days before he was injured during his service with another police officer, his name is Shane. At the start of the series, he wakes up in a hospital because few days before he was injured during his service with another police officer, Shane.

I haven't seen this TV show, but I assume this happens at the start of it? It's best to specify when here, I think. I'd use present tense for TV shows and books No need for "his name is here"

ItHe starts out as normal police officer and then he become a pericolous survivor. He starts out as normal police officer and then he become a survivor.

It = for inanimate objects, like a table, a phone, an apple, whatever. Calling a human being "it" would be gravely offensive. Calling an animal "it" depends on the context - pets usually get "he" or "she", while wild animals and farm animals are almost always "it". Pericolous --> I have never heard this word before. If you mean "perilous", I wouldn't use that here, as it means "risky" or "dangerous". If you want an adjective with "survivor", I'd go with "hardened survivor".