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Nov. 26, 2023

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I don't to be a Chinese student.

Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even a middle school student has a feeling of disinterest in learning. As the vice class monitor in my class, I naturally face greater pressure. Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious.
I am only thirteen years old this year, and at this age, I need to study seven subjects. Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired.
What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours?

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I don't to be a Chinese student.


I don't want to be a Chinese student. I don't want to be a Chinese student.

The title needs a verb, I assume you meant "want"

I don't want to be a Chinese student. I don't want to be a Chinese student.

Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even a middle school student has a feeling of disinterest in learning.


Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even a middle school student has a feeling ofs feel disinterested in learning. Chinese students face a lot of academic pressure, and even middle school students feel disinterested in learning.

As the vice class monitor in my class, I naturally face greater pressure.


As the vicea class monitor in my class, I naturally face even greater pressure. As a class monitor in my class, I naturally face even greater pressure.

Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious.


Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful[satisfactory, accomplishment, achievement, etc.] enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious. Although I ranked first in the class, which is already [satisfactory, accomplishment, achievement, etc.] enough, the issue of interpersonal communication makes me anxious.

"Beautiful" could be used there, but sounds somewhat unnatural. Beautiful is used more for things like art, nature, poetry, music, physically attractive people, etc. You can either use a noun like achievement or accomplishment here, or an adjective like satisfactory or outstanding. I personally would use a noun here.

Although I ranked first in the class, which is already beautiful enough, the issue of good enough, (interpersonal communication / communication) makes me anxious. Although I ranked first in the class, which is already good enough, (interpersonal communication / communication) makes me anxious.

Beautiful is for appearance.

I am only thirteen years old this year, and at this age, I need to study seven subjects.


I am only thirteen years old this year, and even at this age, I need to study seven subjects. I am only thirteen years old this year, and even at this age, I need to study seven subjects.

Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired.


Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired. Although I have a love for learning, I inevitably feel tired.

What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours?


What confuses me even more is that if the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours? What confuses me even more is that if the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, why are their achievements higher than ours?

What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China, w. Why are their achievements higher than ours? What confuses me even more is that the education system in the West is much more relaxed than in China. Why are their achievements higher than ours?

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