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School and my family's recently hobby

I recently learn about Macheth in language literature class. Macbeth is a one of William Shakespeare 's masterpiece and I love this story but it was my first time to wach . I struggle to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about it in Japanese. I wish I could learn in Japan.
According to my dad, Shakespeare 's work is learned in faculty of letters in college .

My family including me, are into to do Shogi. I have heard it come from Chaina and it introduced to Japan , but Japan has unique rule of it. A family who go to the same Japanese weekend school gave us a shogi tools and we sterted to do this one week ago.Actually, I prefer Othello than Shogi, because Shogi has so many rules and I'm really confused but it is goot for me to gain many experience and it is fun.My sister seems she like it.

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School and my family's recently hobby

I recently learnt about Machbeth in language literature class.

Macbeth is a one of William Shakespeare 's masterpieces, and I love this story but it was my first time to watch ing it.

You can use "watching" if you watched a play or a movie, or "reading" if you just read the play's script.

I struggle to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about itEnglish texts unless I also read them in Japanese.

Or: "I struggle to write and read English so, I don't really understand things unless I also learn about them in Japanese."

These sentences don't mean the same thing, but I wasn't 100% sure which one you meant.

I wish I could learngo to school in Japan instead.

I am also a little bit guessing what you meant here, so apologies if this is not what you meant.

According to my dad, Shakespeare 's work is learnstudied in faculty of letters the English literature departments in college s.

My family, including me, are into to do Splaying shogi.

I Googled it to double check, but it seems like you don't need to capitalise "shogi", in the same way we don't capitalise "chess" or "backgammon".

I have heard it originally coame from Chaina and it was introduced to Japan , but Japan has its own unique rule ofs for it.

A family who go to the same Japanese weekend school gave us a shogi tools, and we stearted to do thisplay it, one week ago.

Actually, I prefer Othello than Sover shogi, because Sshogi has so many rules and I'm really confused butit makes me feel really confused. On the other hand, it is gootd for me to gain manynew experiences and it is fun to play.

You can say "I prefer X over Y" or "I prefer X to Y".

I split this into two sentences so you can use the phrase "on the other hand" to add an argument against your previous point.

My sister seems sheto like it.

Or: "My sister says she likes it."

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mapomapo

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Thank you for correcting my mistakes ! I really appreciate you taking the time to look up whether I should capitalize it or not on Google for me.I also learned backgammon. I want to play it !

School and myfamily's recently hobby

I recently learn about Macheth in language literature class.

I recently learnt about Machbeth in language literature class.

Macbeth is a one of Willian Shakespeare 's masterpiece and I love this story but it was my first time to wach and I am struggling to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about it in Japanewe.

I wish I could learn in Japan.

I wish I could learngo to school in Japan instead.

I am also a little bit guessing what you meant here, so apologies if this is not what you meant.

According to my dad, Shakespeare 's work learn in faculty of letters in college .

My family including me, are into to do Shogi.

My family, including me, are into to do Splaying shogi.

I Googled it to double check, but it seems like you don't need to capitalise "shogi", in the same way we don't capitalise "chess" or "backgammon".

I have heard it is come from Chaina and it introduced to Japan , but Japan has unique rule of it.

aA family who go to the same Japanese school gave us a shogi tools and we sterted to do this one weeks ago.

Actually, I prefer Othello than shogi, because chogi has so many rules and I'm really confused but it is goot for me to gain many experience and it is fun.

My sister seems she like it.

My sister seems sheto like it.

Or: "My sister says she likes it."

I have heard it come from Chaina and it introduced to Japan , but Japan has unique rule of it.

I have heard it originally coame from Chaina and it was introduced to Japan , but Japan has its own unique rule ofs for it.

A family who go to the same Japanese school gave us a shogi tools and we sterted to do this one weeks ago.

School and my family's recently hobby

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Macbeth is a one of William Shakespeare 's masterpiece and I love this story but it was my first time to wach and I am struggling to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about it in Japanese.

Macbeth is a one of Willian Shakespeare 's masterpiece and I love this story but it was my first time to wach and I am struggling to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about it in Japanese.

Macbeth is a one of William Shakespeare 's masterpiece and I love this story but it was my first time to wach .

Macbeth is a one of William Shakespeare 's masterpieces, and I love this story but it was my first time to watch ing it.

You can use "watching" if you watched a play or a movie, or "reading" if you just read the play's script.

I struggle to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about it in Japanese.

I struggle to write and read English so, I don't really understand than I learn about itEnglish texts unless I also read them in Japanese.

Or: "I struggle to write and read English so, I don't really understand things unless I also learn about them in Japanese." These sentences don't mean the same thing, but I wasn't 100% sure which one you meant.

According to my dad, Shakespeare 's work is learned in faculty of letters in college .

According to my dad, Shakespeare 's work is learnstudied in faculty of letters the English literature departments in college s.

A family who go to the same Japanese weekend school gave us a shogi tools and we sterted to do this one weeks ago.

A family who go to the same Japanese weekend school gave us a shogi tools and we sterted to do this one week ago.

A family who go to the same Japanese weekend school gave us a shogi tools, and we stearted to do thisplay it, one week ago.

Actually, I prefer Othello than Shogi, because Shogi has so many rules and I'm really confused but it is goot for me to gain many experience and it is fun.

Actually, I prefer Othello than Sover shogi, because Sshogi has so many rules and I'm really confused butit makes me feel really confused. On the other hand, it is gootd for me to gain manynew experiences and it is fun to play.

You can say "I prefer X over Y" or "I prefer X to Y". I split this into two sentences so you can use the phrase "on the other hand" to add an argument against your previous point.

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