In short, they think they are kind, generous and capable people, but society, people, leaders and, organizations and society in general don't treat them well. In short, they think they are kind, generous and capable people, but people, leaders, organizations and society in general don't treat them well.

"Society" comprises of "people, leaders and organizations," so it makes sense to put "in general" to tie the list together.

If you always conclude thattribute unsatisfactory things to outside factors, you will never be happy. If you always attribute unsatisfactory things to outside factors, you will never be happy.

In the context of an idea, "conclude" should set off an clause: "If you always conclude that unsatisfactory things result from outside factors…" "Conclude" doesn't take on a noun object when it is used in this sense.

For mePersonally, I always concludattribute unpleasant things to myself and I think most of the time I am happy. Personally, I always attribute unpleasant things to myself and I think most of the time I am happy.

https://forum.wordreference.com/threads/as-for-myself-me.1589310/ You could also write "as to myself" or "as for myself," but it sounds inelegant because of the repetition of "myself."

No matter how high a position a leader has, when I touch them, I never feel they have something special than me,t I don't have; they are just a similar person in a different position. No matter how high a position a leader has, when I touch them, I never feel they have something special that I don't have; they are just a similar person in a different position.

"Touch" could work metaphorically, but it doesn't make sense on a literal level.

If I am not interested in someone, I still respect them and do not show my unpleasant feelings, and I just avoid getting in touchencountering with them. If I am not interested in someone, I still respect them and do not show my unpleasant feelings, and I just avoid encountering with them.

"Getting in touch" is something intentional, so it doesn't make sense to talk about "avoiding" it.

Take care of your health, do well in your job, don't waste time,: that is enough. Take care of your health, do well in your job, don't waste time: that is enough.

Don't leworry about others' approveal of you. Don't worry about others' approval of you.

This makes more sense to me. The original sentence implies that we want them to disapprove of us, which doesn't sound like what you intended.

As long as you approve of yourself, it is enough. As long as you approve of yourself, it is enough.

This was an incomplete sentence, so we needed to expand it.

Even if you are a piece of gold, please also don't leworry about others approveal of youothers. Even if you are a piece of gold, please also don't worry about the approval of others.

So never complain,: it's useless. So never complain: it's useless.

If you are really a talented, maybe the smartest choice is that you work for yourself and you don't need anyone to's approve of youal. If you are really talented, maybe the smartest choice is that you work for yourself and you don't need anyone's approval.

"Talent" can be used as a noun to refer to people, but that's more in the sense of referring to people in general ("hiring new talent").