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March 30, 2023

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An Informal email

Juan
Can you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies? It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon and I would like to bake some, and bring them to her birthday party. I think she'd love them! How about baking the cookies together? You already know that I'm not as good at cooking as you, so your help would be more than welcome. After we finish the cookies, we could do something fun. Do you think we should go to the cinema? I saw that a new movie has just come up. Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you. Also, if there isn't any buses, I can take you home.
Cheers,
Sergio

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Can you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies?

I think she'd love them!

How about baking the cookies together?

You already know that I'm not as good at cooking as you, so your help would be more than welcome.

After we finish the cookies, we could do something fun.

Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you.

Cheers,

Sergio

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sergio

April 1, 2023

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An Informal email

Juan

Can you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies?

I think she'd love them!

You already know that I'm not as good at cooking as you, so your help would be more than welcome.

Do you think we should go to the cinema?

Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you.

Cheers,

Sergio

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sergio

March 31, 2023

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Juan

Can you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies?

I think she'd love them!

You already know that I'm not as good at cooking as you, so your help would be more than welcome.

After we finish the cookies, we could do something fun.

Do you think we should go to the cinema?

Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you.

Cheers,

Sergio

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sergio

March 31, 2023

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I think she'd love them!

How about baking the cookies together?

You already know that I'm not as good at cooking as you, so your help would be more than welcome.

After we finish the cookies, we could do something fun.

Cheers,

Sergio

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sergio

March 31, 2023

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An Informal email


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An Informal eEmail An Informal Email

Juan


Dear Juan, Dear Juan,

"Juan," works too

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Juan, Juan,

Can you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies?


Canould you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies? Could you send me your mum's recipe for chocolate cookies?

Correct either way, but I'm correcting for a more informal style.

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It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon and I would like to bake some, and bring them to her birthday party.


It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon and I woul, so I'd like to bake some, and to bring them to her birthday party. It's Maria's birthday next Saturday, so I'd like to bake some to bring to her birthday party.

It's her birthday all day, so you wouldn't say any specific time. If you meant her party is Saturday afternoon, you could say "Maria's birthday party is next Saturday afternoon, so I want to bake some (cookies) to bring."

It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon and I would like to bake some, and bring them to her birthday party. It's Maria's birthday next Saturday and I would like to bake some and bring them to her birthday party.

It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon and I would like to bake some, and bring them to her birthday party. It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon and I would like to bake some and bring them to her birthday party.

It's Maria's birthday next Saturday afternoon andso I would like to bake some,them and bring them to her birthday party that afternoon. It's Maria's birthday next Saturday so I would like to bake them and bring them to her birthday party that afternoon.

I think she'd love them!


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How about baking the cookies together?


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How about bakingwe bake the cookies together? How about we bake the cookies together?

Yours is fine, but because this is an invitation this is more natural

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You already know that I'm not as good at cooking as you, so your help would be more than welcome.


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After we finish the cookies, we could do something fun.


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After we finish the cookies, we could do something fun. After we finish the cookies we could do something fun.

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Do you think we should go to the cinema?


Do you think we should go to the cinema? Do you think we should go to the cinema?

I'd say movie theater instead of the cinema but I think that's just because I'm American. A few other options: -Do you want to go to the cinema? -We could go to the cinema! -Would you like to go to the cinema? -Want to see a movie? The last one personally feels most natural to me, but they're all correct.

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Do you think we shouldWould you like to go to the cinemamovies? Would you like to go to the movies?

This is more how we say it in the US.

I saw that a new movie has just come up.


I saw that a new movie has just coame upout. I saw that a new movie just came out.

I saw that a new movie has just come upout. I saw that a new movie has just come out.

I saw that a new movie has just come upout. I saw that a new movie has just come out.

More natural: I saw that a new movie just came out.

I saw that there's a new movie which has just come upbeen released. I saw that there's a new movie which has just been released.

Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you.


Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you. Don't worry about the money, I'll pay for you.

To be more informal and friendly, you could replace "I'll pay for you" with "I'll cover you."

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Also, if there isn't any buses, I can take you home.


Also,nd if there isaren't any buses, I can take you home. And if there aren't any buses, I can take you home.

Also, if there isaren't any buses, I can take you home. Also, if there aren't any buses, I can take you home.

Also, if there isaren't any buses, I can take you home. Also, if there aren't any buses I can take you home.

buses is plural, so "to be" also needs to be plural

Also, if there isaren't any buses, I can take you home. Also, if there aren't any buses, I can take you home.

Cheers,


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Sergio


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