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Tammy

Jan. 19, 2026

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Temperature Dropping

Today is really cold in Shanghai. The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.

Now my throat is a bit sore. I hope it's not a cold.

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TA drop in temperature Dropping

Today, it is really cold in Shanghai.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.

Now my throat is a bit sore.

I hope it's not a cold.

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Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thanks a lot!

Have a nice day!

Today it is really cold in Shanghai.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.

Now my throat is a bit sore.

I hope it's not a cold.

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Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

TodayIt is really cold in Shanghai today.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.

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Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

Temperature Dropping / Dropping Temperature / Plummeting Temperature

In English, for a two-word title, an adjective+noun combination feels more natural than noun+verb.

Today it is really cold in Shanghai.

Adding “it” is idiomatic, although there’s nothing wrong with your original grammatically.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

TheA sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.

Since you’re making a statement about sudden changes in general, “a sudden change” feels more natural to me than “the.”

“The body” is fine, referring to everyone’s bodies as well as your own.

Now my throat is a bit sore.

I hope it's not a cold.

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I hope it’s not a cold, too!

By the way, if you have time, could you check my November post? It only received one correction and I’d like a “second opinion.” :-)

https://langcorrect.com/journals/从中国直走到利比里亞/

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Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thanks again!

啊,我之前怎么就没看到你这篇呢?马上去看!

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JoeTofu

Jan. 20, 2026

0

没关系!谢谢你 (^_^)v

Temperature Dropping

Today is really cold in Shanghai.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.

Now my throat is a bit sore.

I hope it's not a cold.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thank you!

Have a nice day!

The Temperature Is Dropping

Today it is really cold in Shanghai.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.

I changed it from "the" to "my" because it seemed like you were talking about your own body in particular, rather than the human body in general as "the" implied.

Now my throat is a bit sore.

I hope it's not a cold.

Feedback

Great job! I hope your throat feels better!

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thanks a lot!

Have a nice day!

Temperature Dropping

Today is really cold in Shanghai.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.

The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.

Now, my throat is a bit sore.

I hope it's not a cold.

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Randakun

Jan. 19, 2026

39

I hope you feel OK🥺

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Jan. 20, 2026

23

Thank you very much!

Have a nice day!

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Temperature Dropping / Dropping Temperature / Plummeting Temperature

In English, for a two-word title, an adjective+noun combination feels more natural than noun+verb.

TA drop in temperature Dropping

Today is really cold in Shanghai.


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Today it is really cold in Shanghai.

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Today it is really cold in Shanghai.

Adding “it” is idiomatic, although there’s nothing wrong with your original grammatically.

TodayIt is really cold in Shanghai today.

Today it is really cold in Shanghai.

Today, it is really cold in Shanghai.

The temperature has been dropping since last night.


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The temperature has been dropping since last night.

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The sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.


The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.

The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.

I changed it from "the" to "my" because it seemed like you were talking about your own body in particular, rather than the human body in general as "the" implied.

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TheA sudden change in weather always catches the body off guard.

Since you’re making a statement about sudden changes in general, “a sudden change” feels more natural to me than “the.” “The body” is fine, referring to everyone’s bodies as well as your own.

The sudden change in weather always catches themy body off guard.

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Now my throat is a bit sore.


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I hope it's not a cold.


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