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Feb. 3, 2020

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What Brings You Happiness?

I talked to my mother for an hour before I went to bed.
She told me some interesting things.

The value of happiness has quite changed from 30, 50 or 70 years ago.
Old people were said that they became finally adults when they married and had their own children.
Nowadays, it’s whole different.
Marriage is not always the happiest thing, and also there are couples who can’t have their children, or who choose not to have children.
Forcing grown-up children to marry someone has no meaning.
Do getting marry, and having their children make their parents happy?
If so, it’s only their parents’ egoistic.
If parents truly hope their children’s happinesses, they should respect what their children choose.

I listened to her carefully and she said,
“These are all you said when you’re young. I told them to one of my friends today, and she got surprised at these thoughts.”
I was so surprised that my mother remembered what I said and accepted it.
Also, I totally forgot that I told her such things!

My thoughts have not changed at all even though I got married and have my own child.
What brings you happiness in your life?


【何があなたに幸せをもたらしますか】
私は寝る前に母と一時間、話をしました。
母は私にいくつかおもしろいことを話しました。

幸せの価値は30年、50年、70年前とは全く変わっている。
昔の人は、結婚して子供を産んでやっと一人前になったと言いました。
現在、それは全く異なります。
結婚は必ずしも一番幸せなこととは限らないし、自分たちの子どもをもてない、また、もたない選択をする夫婦もいる。
成人した子どもを誰かと無理やり結婚させるなんて全く無意味だ。
結婚して、子どもをもつことが親を幸せにするのでしょうか。
もしそうなら、それはただの親のエゴです。
もし親が本当に子どもの幸せを願うなら、子どもの選択を尊重すべきです。

私は母の話をじっくりと聴いていました。
母はこう言いました。
「これは全てあなたが若い頃に言ったことよ。私は今日、友達にこのことを話したの。彼女はその考えに驚いていたわ。」
私は、母が私の言ったことを覚えていて、それを受け入れていたことにとても驚きました。
そんなことを言ったなんて完全に忘れていたけど!

私は結婚し、子どもをもちましたが、その考えは全く変わっていません。
人生で、何があなたに幸せをもたらしますか?

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Feb. 5, 2020

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Nowadays, it’s whole lot different.

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Feb. 4, 2020

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What Brings You Happiness?

I talked to my mother for an hour before I went to bed.

She told me some interesting things.

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Feb. 4, 2020

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I talked to my mother for an hour before I went to bed.

She told me some interesting things.

Forcing grown-up children to marry someone has no meaning.

I listened to her carefully and she said,

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Feb. 4, 2020

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What Brings You Happiness?

I talked to my mother for an hour before I went to bed.

She told me some interesting things.

Forcing grown-up children to marry someone has no meaning.

I listened to her carefully and she said,

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Feb. 4, 2020

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“These are all you said when you’re young. I told them to one of my friends today, and she got surprised at these thoughts.” I was so surprised that my mother remembered what I said and accepted it. Also I totally forgot that I told her such things! My thoughts has not changed at all even though I got married and have my own child. What brings you happiness in your life?


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The value of happiness has quite changed from 30, 50 or 70 years ago.


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Old people were said that they became finally adults when they married and had their own children.


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Marriage is not always the happiest thing, and also there are couples who can’t have their children, or who choose not to have children.


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Forcing grown-up children to marry someone has no meaning.


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“These are all you said when you’re young. I told them to one of my friends today, and she got surprised at these thoughts.” I was so surprised that my mother remembered what I said and accepted it. Also I totally forgot that I told her such things! My thoughts have not changed at all even though I got married and have my own child. What brings you happiness in your life?


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