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April 30, 2023

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Writing Challenge, Day 211

Today is day 211 of my daily English writing challenge. Today I went to Telecom Commercial Agency. But she asked to come back there in next week.😥

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Writing Challenge, Day 211

Today is day 211 of my daily English writing challenge.

Today I went to Telecom Commercial Agency.

Writing Challenge, Day 211


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Today is day 211 of my daily English writing challenge.


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Today I went to Telecom Commercial Agency.


Today I went to the Telecom Commercial Agency. Today I went to the Telecom Commercial Agency.

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But she asked to come back there in next week.😥


But sthey asked me to come back there in next week.😥 But they asked me to come back next week.😥

I used 'they' because it makes more sense. It's more like the woman is asking you on part of the company and you didn't say "the woman asked, the receptionist asked, etc."

But she asked to come back there in next week.😥 - grammatically correct version But she asked me to come back next week.😥- less awkward and grammatically correct version But she asked to come back there next week.😥 - grammatically correct version But she asked me to come back next week.😥- less awkward and grammatically correct version

This sentence is quite unclear. Who is she asking to come back next week? Also who is "she"? Is it an employee at Telecom? Also the word "in" was out of place and not needed.

But she asked me to come back there in next week.😥 But she asked me to come back next week.😥

aww.

But sthey asked me to come back there in next week.😥 But they asked me to come back there next week.😥

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