Jan. 25, 2021
BTS
I became a huge fan of BTS recently. I was originally a fan of other Kpop groups and I didn't really like BTS before. So, I didn't understand why BTS was so popular in the world not only in Asian countries at that time, and I was curious why they have been successful in the world. Then I started watching their performance on Youtube, and I realized that they are very good at singing as dancing even though their dance performance is very intense. (Some of the Kpop group is lip-syncing during performing at their stage.)
Usually, recent Kpop groups have bilingual speakers who can speak Korean and English to advertise in the world. On the other hand, no one is a bilingual speaker in BTS, and one of the members is very good at speaking English since he has been studying English so hard. And BTS even joined UN General Assembly to give a speech in English.
BTS is nominated for Grammy in 2021 and it's been 57 years since an Asian artist was nominated for Grammy first time. I am so proud of them as their fun and Asian because Asian artist is a minority in the American music industry.
That's why I am totally fun of BTS now since they have been working so hard and making history as a Kpop artist in the world.
私は最近、BTS の大ファンになりました。元々、別のKpopグループのファンで、BTS はそこまで好きではありませんでした。なので、なぜBTSがアジアだけでなく、世界中で人気なのかその時は理解できず、なぜこんなにも世界で成功しているのか興味がありました。そして、彼らのパフォーマンスをYoutubeで見始めました。そして、とても激しく ダンスを踊っているにも関わらず、歌が上手いことが分かりました。（パフォーマンス中は口パクで歌っているKpopグループもいます。）
最近のKpopグループは、世界で活躍するために、韓国語と英語が話せるバイリンガルのメンバーがいることが普通です。一方で、BTSのメンバーにはバイリンガル いませんが、一人のメンバーが英語を必死に勉強しているので、とても流暢に英語を話すことができます。そして、BTSは国連総会でも英語でスピーチを行った経験もあります。
また、BTSは2021年のグラミー賞で、アジア人として57年ぶりにノミネートされています。アメリカの音楽業界ではアジア人がマイノリティーなので、彼らのファンとして、アジア人としても、BTSを誇りに思います。
たくさん努力をし、Kpop アーティストとして世界で歴史を作ってきたので、今ではBTSの大ファンです。
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BTS
I became a huge fan of BTS recently. I became a huge fan of BTS recently.
You could also phrase this as, “I recently became a huge fan of BTS”, but I think both ways are grammatically correct.
I was originally a fan of other Kpop groups, and I didn't really like BTS before. I was originally a fan of other Kpop groups, and I didn't really like BTS before.
So, at that time, I didn't understand why BTS was so popular in the world not only in Asian countries at that time, but around the world, and I was curious why they haved been successful in the world.
So, at that time, I didn't understand why BTS was so popular not only in Asian countries, but around the world, and I was curious why they had been successful.
Then I started watching their performances on Youtube, and I realized that they are very good at singing as dancingers as well as dancers, and they can do both at the same time (?) even though their dance performance is very intense.
Then I started watching their performances on Youtube, and I realized that they are very good at singers as well as dancers, and they can do both at the same time (?) even though their dance performance is very intense.
(Some of thThis is because some Kpop group is lip-syncing during while performing at theiron stage. )
This is because some Kpop groups lip-sync while performing on stage.
Usually, recent Kpop groups have bilingual speakers who can speakof Korean and English to advertise inthemselves around the world.
Usually Kpop groups have bilingual speakers of Korean and English to advertise themselves around the world.
On the other hand, no oneeveryone in BTS is a bilingual speaker in BTS, and one of the members is verexceptionally good at speaking English, since he has been studying English so hard.
On the other hand, everyone in BTS is bilingual, and one of the members is exceptionally good at speaking English, since he has been studying English so hard.
“No one” would mean that nobody in BTS is bilingual, which means that they can’t speak both Korean and English.
“He has” is often written/said as “He’s”.
And BTS even joined a UN General Assembly meeting to give a speech in English. And BTS even joined a UN General Assembly meeting to give a speech in English.
BTS is nominated for a Grammy in 2021, and it's been 57 years since an Asian artist was nominated for a Grammy for the first time. BTS is nominated for a Grammy in 2021, and it's been 57 years since an Asian artist was nominated for a Grammy for the first time.
I am so proud of them, as theiry’re both fun and Asian, because Asian artist iss are a minority in the American music industry.
I am so proud of them, as they’re both fun and Asian, because Asian artists are a minority in the American music industry.
“I am” is often written/said as “I’m”.
That's why I am totally fuan of BTS now, since they have been working so hard and making history as a Kpop artist ins around the world.
That's why I am totally fan of BTS now, since they have been working so hard and making history as Kpop artists around the world.
“I am” is often written/said as “I’m”.
“They have” is often written/said as “They’ve”.
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Jan. 31, 2021
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I became a huge fan of BTS recently. I became a huge fan of BTS recently. I became a huge fan of BTS recently. You could also phrase this as, “I recently became a huge fan of BTS”, but I think both ways are grammatically correct. |
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I was originally a fan of other Kpop groups and I didn't really like BTS before. I was originally a fan of other Kpop groups, and I didn't really like BTS before. I was originally a fan of other Kpop groups, and I didn't really like BTS before. |
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So, I didn't understand why BTS was so popular in the world not only in Asian countries at that time, and I was curious why they have been successful in the world.
So, at that time, I didn't understand why BTS was so popular |
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Then I started watching their performance on Youtube, and I realized that they are very good at singing as dancing even though their dance performance is very intense.
Then I started watching their performances on Youtube, and I realized that they are very good at sing |
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(Some of the Kpop group is lip-syncing during performing at their stage. )
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Usually, recent Kpop groups have bilingual speakers who can speak Korean and English to advertise in the world.
Usually |
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On the other hand, no one is a bilingual speaker in BTS, and one of the members is very good at speaking English since he has been studying English so hard.
On the other hand, “No one” would mean that nobody in BTS is bilingual, which means that they can’t speak both Korean and English. “He has” is often written/said as “He’s”. |
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And BTS even joined UN General Assembly to give a speech in English. And BTS even joined a UN General Assembly meeting to give a speech in English. And BTS even joined a UN General Assembly meeting to give a speech in English. |
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BTS is nominated for Grammy in 2021 and it's been 57 years since an Asian artist was nominated for Grammy first time. BTS is nominated for a Grammy in 2021, and it's been 57 years since an Asian artist was nominated for a Grammy for the first time. BTS is nominated for a Grammy in 2021, and it's been 57 years since an Asian artist was nominated for a Grammy for the first time. |
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I am so proud of them as their fun and Asian because Asian artist is a minority in the American music industry.
I am so proud of them, as the “I am” is often written/said as “I’m”. |
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That's why I am totally fun of BTS now since they have been working so hard and making history as a Kpop artist in the world.
That's why I am totally f “I am” is often written/said as “I’m”. “They have” is often written/said as “They’ve”. |
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