Feb. 10, 2021
Our Neighbors (2)
Each time we ask her to be more quiet and stop her racket, she is in denial. She refuses to put felt pads under the chairs. She told us that she can do whatever she wants in her apartment. Basically she does not care about her downstairs neighbors. She gets angry by shouting. I think she became crazy. She lies by telling us that there is no child who is running at her place. Anyway, she said to us that we had to clear off if we were not happy!
A Monday morning, after a very bad weekend with a lot of noise, my mom went up with my sister because she started her washing machine at 6 am (again, very inconsiderate). That was the final straw. Her boyfriend opened the door and invited them to come inside. She was in the shower. He wanted to show my mom and my sister that the washing machine was not running even though it was. She has two washing machines. One in her bathroom and one in the cellar and he was going to show them the one that was not in motion. You can see that these people are very perverse. My mom and my sister did not have the time to reach the washing machine that she hurtled from her shower. She started screaming and shouting as always. Her boyfriend mugged my mom and sister by shaking them violently, giving them punches. My sister had an intercostal muscle that was teared. He crushed her shoulder. They still have pain in the back.
Finally, they went to the doctor to get medical certificates and they made a complaint. Since she does not want to resolve the problem amicable, we are going to take the court because in our collective ownership's regulation, it is written that it is forbidden to put wood floor and tiles on the floor.
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Our Neighbors (2)
Each time we ask her to be more quiet and stop her racket, she is in denialuncooperative.
Each time we ask her to be more quiet and stop her racket, she is uncooperative.
The use of the word "denial" doesn't match what you're saying in the rest of the paragraph.
She refuses to put felt pads under the chairs.
She told us that she can do whatever she wants in her apartment.
Basically she does not care about her downstairs neighbors.
She gets angry by shouting.
She lies by telling us that there is no child who is running at her place.
Anyway, she said to us that we had to clear off if we were not happy!
AOne Monday morning, after a very bad weekend with a lot of noise, my mom went up with my sister because she started her washing machine at 6 a.m (again, very inconsiderate).
One Monday morning after a very bad weekend with a lot of noise, she started her washing machine at 6 a.m.
In very informal writing, you can write 6 am, but in academic writing, it should be written as "a.m." See next sentence for additional comments.
That was the final straw. It was very inconsiderate, so my mom went up with my sister to talk to our neighbor. That was the final straw. It was very inconsiderate, so my mom went up with my sister to talk to our neighbor.
This train-of-thought fits better after this sentence.
Her boyfriend opened the door and invited them to come inside.
She was in the shower.
He wanted to show my mom and my sister that the washing machine was not running even though it was.
She has two washing machines.
One in her bathroom and one in the cellar and he was going to show them the one that was not in motion.
You can see that these people are very perversestubborn and belligerent.
You can see that these people are very stubborn and belligerent.
In American English, the word "perverse" carries a different connotation even though the definition fits in to what you're trying to say. "Stubborn and belligerent" fit better with what you're trying to say.
My mom and my sister did not have the time to reach the washing machine that she hurtledas the neighbor leapt from ther shower.
My mom and my sister did not have the time to reach the washing machine as the neighbor leapt from the shower.
Her boyfriend muggedbecame violent to my mom and sister by shaking them violently, giving them punchesand punching them.
Her boyfriend became violent to my mom and sister by shaking them and punching them.
Mugged means to rob so it didn't fit in this context.
My sister had an intercostal muscle that was tearedorn.
My sister had an intercostal muscle that was torn.
He crushed her shoulder. He crushed her shoulder.
Who's shoulder? Your sister or your mom?
They still have pain in their backs. They still have pain in their backs.
Finally, they went to the doctor to get medical certificatesexams, and they madefiled a complaint with the ________.
Finally, they went to the doctor to get medical exams, and they filed a complaint with the ________.
Since she does not want to resolve the problem amicabley, we are going to take the court because in our collective ownership's regulation, it is written that it is forbidden to put wood floor and tiles on the floors, putting wood or tile floors is prohibited.
Since she does not want to resolve the problem amicably, we are going to take the court because in our collective ownership's regulations, putting wood or tile floors is prohibited.
Feb. 11, 2021
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Each time we ask her to be more quiet and stop her racket, she is in denial.
Each time we ask her to be more quiet and stop her racket, she is The use of the word "denial" doesn't match what you're saying in the rest of the paragraph. |
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She refuses to put felt pads under the chairs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She told us that she can do whatever she wants in her apartment. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Basically she does not care about her downstairs neighbors. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She gets angry by shouting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think she became crazy. |
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She lies by telling us that there is no child who is running at her place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, she said to us that we had to clear off if we were not happy! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A Monday morning, after a very bad weekend with a lot of noise, my mom went up with my sister because she started her washing machine at 6 am (again, very inconsiderate).
In very informal writing, you can write 6 am, but in academic writing, it should be written as "a.m." See next sentence for additional comments. |
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That was the final straw. That was the final straw. It was very inconsiderate, so my mom went up with my sister to talk to our neighbor. That was the final straw. It was very inconsiderate, so my mom went up with my sister to talk to our neighbor. This train-of-thought fits better after this sentence. |
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Her boyfriend opened the door and invited them to come inside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She was in the shower. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He wanted to show my mom and my sister that the washing machine was not running even though it was. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She has two washing machines. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One in her bathroom and one in the cellar and he was going to show them the one that was not in motion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can see that these people are very perverse.
You can see that these people are very In American English, the word "perverse" carries a different connotation even though the definition fits in to what you're trying to say. "Stubborn and belligerent" fit better with what you're trying to say. |
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My mom and my sister did not have the time to reach the washing machine that she hurtled from her shower.
My mom and my sister did not have the time to reach the washing machine |
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She started screaming and shouting as always. |
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Her boyfriend mugged my mom and sister by shaking them violently, giving them punches.
Her boyfriend Mugged means to rob so it didn't fit in this context. |
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My sister had an intercostal muscle that was teared.
My sister had an intercostal muscle that was t |
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He crushed her shoulder. He crushed her shoulder. He crushed her shoulder. Who's shoulder? Your sister or your mom? |
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They still have pain in the back. They still have pain in their backs. They still have pain in their backs. |
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Finally, they went to the doctor to get medical certificates and they made a complaint.
Finally, they went to the doctor to get medical |
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Since she does not want to resolve the problem amicable, we are going to take the court because in our collective ownership's regulation, it is written that it is forbidden to put wood floor and tiles on the floor.
Since she does not want to resolve the problem amicabl |
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