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A Wall of Roses
Yesterday, I was stunned by a wall of roses on my way to work.
The type of those roses was not special, and the colour was not my favourite. The stunning point was the number of flowers and how lively they were.
I captured parts of them. You can see it here:https://youtube.com/shorts/B5H_HNT_m0o?si=s0NP0zqELs2rvgvC
As always, if you find any mistakes in my pronunciation, please let me know.
Thanks in advance!
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A Wall of Roses
Yesterday, I was stunned by a wall of roses on my way to work.
The type of those roses was not special, and the colour was not my favourite. The type of those roses was not special, and the colour was not my favourite.
The roses were neither a special type, nor my favorite color.
The stunning poinart was the number of flowers and how lvivelyid they were.
The stunning part was the number of flowers and how vivid they were.
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Just slight rewording for naturalness, but your sentences are very understandable!
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Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
A Wall of Roses
Yesterday, I was stunned by a wall of roses on my way to work.
The varietype of (those) roses was not special, and the colour was not my favourite.
The variety of (those) roses was not special, and the colour was not my favourite.
The stunning point/aspect was the number of flowers and how lively they were. The stunning point/aspect was the number of flowers and how lively they were.
I captured parts of them.
You can see ithem here: https://youtube.com/shorts/B5H_HNT_m0o?si=s0NP0zqELs2rvgvC
You can see them here: https://youtube.com/shorts/B5H_HNT_m0o?si=s0NP0zqELs2rvgvC
As always, if you find any mistakes in my pronunciation, please let me know.
Thanks in advance!
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It looks like roses bloom much earlier in Shanghai than here in Oregon. 🌹😊
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Thanks again!
The climate differences are quite significant. After all, the latitude difference is about 10 degrees or so.
另外，我这次的发音如何呀？如果有不好的地方，请帮忙指出来。要是很好，就请表扬，hahaha
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OK, I’ll give some feedback! :-)
I’m not sure why, but I had trouble understanding the first few words of the narration the first couple of times I listened to it. It might have been because the sentence starts with the object, an uncommon construction in English, so my brain had trouble catching up. Also, “surprise” sounds slightly slurred, like “suffrise,” but this might just be the recording.
“Blooming” seems to have an extra syllable at the beginning, like “buh-loo-ming” (it should be “bloo-ming”).
Nothing else leaped out to me.
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OK, I’ll give some feedback! :-) I’m not sure why, but I had trouble understanding the first few words of the narration the first couple of times I listened to it. It might have been because the sentence starts with the object, an uncommon construction in English, so my brain had trouble catching up. Also, “surprise” sounds slightly slurred, like “suffrise,” but this might just be the recording. “Blooming” seems to have an extra syllable at the beginning, like “buh-loo-ming” (it should be “bloo-ming”). Nothing else leaped out to me.
I checked again and you're right about 'surprise' and 'blooming'! I'll try to do better next time.
Thanks again and have a nice day!
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You’re welcome!
I wish someone would create a platform specifically for giving feedback on video / audio recordings. It would be much more convenient if I could simply record my comment as a short audio or video clip and insert/attach it at the correct location in the original. Transcribing the audio and then describing the pronunciation issue in written form is cumbersome. But I understand that LangCorrect is all about writing, so the developers might not want to build an audio correction module for it. I wonder if any of the other language learning sites offer something like this. Have you noticed any?
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You’re welcome! I wish someone would create a platform specifically for giving feedback on video / audio recordings. It would be much more convenient if I could simply record my comment as a short audio or video clip and insert/attach it at the correct location in the original. Transcribing the audio and then describing the pronunciation issue in written form is cumbersome. But I understand that LangCorrect is all about writing, so the developers might not want to build an audio correction module for it. I wonder if any of the other language learning sites offer something like this. Have you noticed any?
Maybe Hellotalk? But that app's vibe is a little bit noisy.
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Yeah, I looked into Hellotalk a few years ago but didn’t find the vibe very attractive
A Wall of Roses
Yesterday, I was stunned by a wall of roses on my way to work. Yesterday, I was stunned by a wall of roses on my way to work.
The type of those roses wasere not special, and the colour wais not my favourite.
The type of those roses were not special, and the colour is not my favourite.
Roses has types?
You can see it here:https://youtube.com/shorts/B5H_HNT_m0o?si=s0NP0zqELs2rvgvC
As always, if you find any mistakes in my pronunciation, please let me know.
Thanks in advance! Thanks in advance!
Thanks for sharing too 🙏🏾
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Thanks again！
Yes, there are many different varieties of roses. There are currently four types on my balcony.
我这次的发音如何？如果有不好的地方，请帮忙指出来呀。要是很好，就请表扬，hahaha
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Thanks again！ Yes, there are many different varieties of roses. There are currently four types on my balcony. 我这次的发音如何？如果有不好的地方，请帮忙指出来呀。要是很好，就请表扬，hahaha
I'm happy to help 🤠.
Please share 🙏🏾.
😅。你的发音好棒。加油。
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I'm happy to help 🤠. Please share 🙏🏾. 😅。你的发音好棒。加油。
谢谢！
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