June 15, 2022
Journal
My teacups part 3
It's not hard to find a "zojirush" teacup with a filter screen. This time I still chose a black one, but this one was not 360 ml, but 340 ml.
Its filter screen is not made of stainless steel, but plastic components.
Before I made tea, I would wash the tea first. Because of the filter screen, washing tea inside the cup was very easy.
After I washed the tea, I preferred taking the filter screen away. Somehow, I didn't like drinking tea with the filter screen on. I think maybe I have a kind of obsession.
After I used this cup for a few days, I learned information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes.
People think that glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy glass teacup again.
To be continued.
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My teacups, part 3. My teacups, part 3.
It's not hard to find a "zZojirush" teacup with a filter screen.
It's not hard to find a "Zojirush" teacup with a filter.
Capitalise company and brand names
I think you can just say filter without 'screen', I understand what you mean without it
This time, I stillagain chose a black one, but this one was not 360 ml, but 340 ml.
This time, I again chose a black one but this one was not 360 ml but 340 ml.
Did you purchase a black one before? I hope this is what you meant, you need to replace 'still' with 'again'
Its filter screen iwas not made of stainless steel, but of plastic components.
Its filter was not made of stainless steel but of plastic components.
You were discussing the same item in the past tense in the last sentence so I would stick with the past tense again
Before I made the tea, I would wash the tea first. Before I made the tea, I would wash the tea first.
Either:
Before I made the tea, I would wash the tea first.
Before I would make the tea, I would wash the tea first.
Articles again. You said 'tea' then 'the tea' in the same sentence
Because of the filter screen, the ability to washing tea inside the cup was very easy.
Because of the screen, the ability to wash tea inside the cup was very easy.
Reading this it took me a couple of times to understand it. It doesn't flow so easily so I added something to split up the clauses better
After I washed the tea, I preferred taking the filter screen away.
After I washed the tea, I preferred taking the filter away.
SomehowFor some reason, I didn't like drinking tea with the filter screen oin.
For some reason, I didn't like drinking tea with the filter in.
I think maybe I have a kindsome sort of obsession.
I think maybe I have some sort of obsession.
After I used this cup for a few days, I learned some information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes. After I used this cup for a few days, I learned some information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes.
People think that a glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy a glass teacup again. People think that a glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy a glass teacup again.
Indefinite articles are needed here
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Reminds me of when I tried to make green tea in a glass teacup a couple of days ago and the glass shattered from overheating. :3 Great piece of writing, as always. Keep it up!
June 15, 2022
This time, I stillagain chose a black one, but this one was not 360 ml, but 340 ml.
Did you purchase a black one before? I hope this is what you meant, you need to replace 'still' with 'again'
Yes. The first one was also black.
June 15, 2022
Yes, it’s common to see a glass cup shatter from overheating. Thank you very much for correcting my journals. By the way, if you want to learn some Chinese, I will try my best to help you.
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My teacups part 3 My teacups, part 3. My teacups, part 3. |
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It's not hard to find a "zojirush" teacup with a filter screen.
It's not hard to find a " Capitalise company and brand names I think you can just say filter without 'screen', I understand what you mean without it |
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This time I still chose a black one, but this one was not 360 ml, but 340 ml.
This time, I Did you purchase a black one before? I hope this is what you meant, you need to replace 'still' with 'again' |
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Its filter screen is not made of stainless steel, but plastic components.
Its filter You were discussing the same item in the past tense in the last sentence so I would stick with the past tense again |
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Before I made tea, I would wash the tea first. Before I made the tea, I would wash the tea first. Before I made the tea, I would wash the tea first. Either: Before I made the tea, I would wash the tea first. Before I would make the tea, I would wash the tea first. Articles again. You said 'tea' then 'the tea' in the same sentence |
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Because of the filter screen, washing tea inside the cup was very easy.
Because of the Reading this it took me a couple of times to understand it. It doesn't flow so easily so I added something to split up the clauses better |
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After I washed the tea, I preferred taking the filter screen away.
After I washed the tea, I preferred taking the filter |
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Somehow, I didn't like drinking tea with the filter screen on.
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I think maybe I have a kind of obsession.
I think maybe I have |
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After I used this cup for a few days, I learned information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes. After I used this cup for a few days, I learned some information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes. After I used this cup for a few days, I learned some information which said that the insulated cups were not suitable for making tea and even harmful sometimes. |
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People think that glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy glass teacup again. People think that a glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy a glass teacup again. People think that a glass cup is the best cup for making tea, so I want to buy a glass teacup again. Indefinite articles are needed here |
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To be continued. |
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