April 23, 2021
Now, she is a junior at a university. In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs do job hunting, when they are a junior. She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may or may not work there, so she applies for a lot of companies. Our family studies in the living room, not our own room. So, she practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to that. So, when she starts to practice, I pretend not to hear that. But I hope that she works at a company where she really wants to work.
My sister is making an effort to find a job
Now, she is a junior at a university.
In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs dostart job hunting, when they are a junior.
In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs start job hunting when they are a junior.
She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may or may not worknot be able to get a job there, so. So, she's applies forying to a lot of companies.
She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may not be able to get a job there. So, she's applying to a lot of companies.
This is a run-on sentence.
Our family studies in the living room, not our own rooms. Our family studies in the living room, not our own rooms.
So, she practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to thait.
She practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to it.
Why 'ashamed'?
So, when she istarts to practiceing, I pretend not to hear thather/listen.
So, when she is practicing, I pretend not to hear her/listen.
But, I hope that she works at a company wherethat she really wants to work.
But, I hope that she works at a company that she really wants.
|
My sister is making an effort to find a job This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Now, she is a junior at a university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs do job hunting, when they are a junior.
In Japan, some people who want to find good jobs |
|
She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may or may not work there, so she applies for a lot of companies.
She said that she wants to work at Netflix, but she may This is a run-on sentence. |
|
Our family studies in the living room, not our own room. Our family studies in the living room, not our own rooms. Our family studies in the living room, not our own rooms. |
|
So, she practices presentations for finding jobs, but I'm just a little ashamed of listening to that.
S Why 'ashamed'? |
|
So, when she starts to practice, I pretend not to hear that.
So, when she is |
|
But I hope that she works at a company where she really wants to work.
But, I hope that she works at a company |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium