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Jan. 29, 2024

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Xixi wetland

There is a great travel spot named Xixi Wetland in HangZhou, China. It is also an ecological protection area. Compared to other nunja, it’s most important characteristic is the ceremony between country yards and nature. There are several Chinese style gardens located in Xixi wetland, the most famous one is GuoZhuang, a large villa of a gentleman named Guo. This place had reception for the empire of Qing Dynasty, who had copy that place in his own garden in Beijing lately. And it is also the prototype of Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers, hundred and thousand kinds of birds are flying freely in there. Wild flowers are booming everywhere, several farmers carrying a hoe walk and loose the soil sometimes.
It is exactly the image that drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, a ancient famous poet, who had written went like this: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome to travel here!

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There is a great travel spot namdestination called Xixi Wetland in HangZhou, China.

“Destination” is a more concise way to say “travel spot”. It sounds more natural / casual to say a place is “called” vs. “named” something.

Compared to other nunja, its most important characteristic is the ceremony between the country yards and nature.

“Its” is the right word to show that the characteristic belongs to this place. “It’s” means “it is”. Add “the” since you are talking about something specific.

There are several Chinese style gardens located in Xixi wetland, t. The most famous one is GuoZhuang, a large villa of a gentleman named Guo.

This place had reception for the empire of Qing Dynasty, who had coprecently that placd a replica made in his own garden in Beijing lately.

I’m not sure what you mean by “had reception for” here.

And it is also the prototype ofinspiration for Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers, hundred
s and thousands of kinds of birds are flying freely in there.

Wild flowers are blooming everywhere, with several farmers carrying a hoe walk andwhile walking around to loosen the soil sometimes.

It is exactly like the image that drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, an ancient famous poet, who had written went like this: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome
to travel here!

Xixi wetland

There is a great travel spot named Xixi Wetland in HangZhou, China.

It is also an ecological protection area.

Compared to other nunja, its most importandistinct characteristic is the cereharmony betweenof country yards and nature.

I'm not sure what a "nunja" is.
It's means "it is", you wanted to say its, meaning belonging to it.

There are several Chinese style gardens located in Xixi wetland, the most famous one is GuoZhuang, a large villa of a gentleman named Guo.

This place had receptionA reception was once hosted there for the empire oferor of the Qing Dynasty, who had copy that placelater copied it in his own garden in Beijing lately.

And it is also the prototype of Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers,
hundred and thousand kinds of birds arebirds of all shapes and sizes flying freely in therethroughout the gardens.

Wild flowers are blooming everywhere, several farmers carrying a hoe s walk and loosen the soil sometimes.

It is exactly like the image that drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, a ancient famous poet, who had written went like thiswrote: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome to travel here!

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Xixi wetland sounds beautiful, I hope I get a chance to visit!
I've been to HangZhou once but it was before I spoke any Mandarin, I'm sure I'd have an even better time this time around.

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simonaliu

Jan. 31, 2024

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welcome to Hangzhou City! You can contact me when you arrive, maybe I can guide you here!

Compared to other nunja, its most important characteristic is the ceremony between country yards and nature.

It’s = “it is”
Its = possession

This place had a reception for the empireeror of Qing Dynasty, who had copyied that place in his own garden in Beijing lately.

And it is also the prototype of Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers, hundred
ands of thousand kinds of birds are flying freely in there.

Wild flowers are blooming everywhere, several farmers, carrying a hoes, walk and loosen the soil sometimes.

It is exactly the image that is drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, an ancient famous poet, who had written went like thiswrote: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome to travel here!

Xixi wetland


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There is a great travel spot named Xixi Wetland in HangZhou, China.


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There is a great travel spot namdestination called Xixi Wetland in HangZhou, China.

“Destination” is a more concise way to say “travel spot”. It sounds more natural / casual to say a place is “called” vs. “named” something.

It is also an ecological protection area.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Compared to other nunja, it’s most important characteristic is the ceremony between country yards and nature.


Compared to other nunja, its most important characteristic is the ceremony between country yards and nature.

It’s = “it is” Its = possession

Compared to other nunja, its most importandistinct characteristic is the cereharmony betweenof country yards and nature.

I'm not sure what a "nunja" is. It's means "it is", you wanted to say its, meaning belonging to it.

Compared to other nunja, its most important characteristic is the ceremony between the country yards and nature.

“Its” is the right word to show that the characteristic belongs to this place. “It’s” means “it is”. Add “the” since you are talking about something specific.

There are several Chinese style gardens located in Xixi wetland, the most famous one is GuoZhuang, a large villa of a gentleman named Guo.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are several Chinese style gardens located in Xixi wetland, t. The most famous one is GuoZhuang, a large villa of a gentleman named Guo.

This place had reception for the empire of Qing Dynasty, who had copy that place in his own garden in Beijing lately.


This place had a reception for the empireeror of Qing Dynasty, who had copyied that place in his own garden in Beijing lately.

This place had receptionA reception was once hosted there for the empire oferor of the Qing Dynasty, who had copy that placelater copied it in his own garden in Beijing lately.

This place had reception for the empire of Qing Dynasty, who had coprecently that placd a replica made in his own garden in Beijing lately.

I’m not sure what you mean by “had reception for” here.

And it is also the prototype of Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.” Surrounded by several rivers, hundred and thousand kinds of birds are flying freely in there.


And it is also the prototype of Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers, hundred
ands of thousand kinds of birds are flying freely in there.

And it is also the prototype of Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers,
hundred and thousand kinds of birds arebirds of all shapes and sizes flying freely in therethroughout the gardens.

And it is also the prototype ofinspiration for Da Guan Yuan, the background scene of the famous book named “The Dream of Red Mansion.”
Surrounded by several rivers, hundred
s and thousands of kinds of birds are flying freely in there.

Wild flowers are booming everywhere, several farmers carrying a hoe walk and loose the soil sometimes.


Wild flowers are blooming everywhere, several farmers, carrying a hoes, walk and loosen the soil sometimes.

Wild flowers are blooming everywhere, several farmers carrying a hoe s walk and loosen the soil sometimes.

Wild flowers are blooming everywhere, with several farmers carrying a hoe walk andwhile walking around to loosen the soil sometimes.

It is exactly the image that drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, a ancient famous poet, who had written went like this: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.” Welcome to travel here!


It is exactly the image that is drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, an ancient famous poet, who had written went like thiswrote: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome to travel here!

It is exactly like the image that drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, a ancient famous poet, who had written went like thiswrote: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome to travel here!

It is exactly like the image that drawn by the Tao Yuan Ming, an ancient famous poet, who had written went like this: “Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely seeing the southern mountains.”
Welcome
to travel here!

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