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Life has treated me badly recently.
I was so anxious that I stayed up late yesterday and happily got two dark circles. I enjoy hanging out by myself. When the sun descends, I prefer sitting on the armchair near the lake and feel the gentle breeze. It seems that the world is stationary at that moment.
I had a half-day off this afternoon and watched two movies during that time. Two romantic movies with bad ending. I’m not sure I prefer which, BE or HE. But sometimes I do enjoy the feeling of crying.
It’s said that a musical festival will be held in our city next month, and that day is my birthday. Can’t wait to see my favorite band coming here. That will be my first live concert experience!!!
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I enjoy hanging outspending time by myself.
I enjoy spending time by myself.
this is more natural, you don't really hang out with yourself.
When the sun descends, I prefer sitting on the armchair near the lake and feeling the gentle breeze. When the sun descends, I prefer sitting on the armchair near the lake and feeling the gentle breeze.
or alternatively, "...the lake to feel the gentle breeze", if you use and you need to conjugate to feel with I as the subject.
Two romantic movies with bad endings. Two romantic movies with bad endings.
two movies so endings should be plural, if you were going to use singular it should be "a bad ending" anyway
I’m not sure which I prefer which, BE or HE.
I’m not sure which I prefer, BE or HE.
I guess BE and HE mean bad/happy ending but these are not at all common acronyms, I would not recommend using them.
It’s said that heard a musical festival will be held in our city next month, and that day is my birthday.
I heard a musical festival will be held in our city next month, and that day is my birthday.
It's said is actually a bit idiomatic and often used for rumors or myths, it doesn't really work here, "apparently" or "I heard" work better here.
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Life has treated me badly recently. |
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I was so anxious that I stayed up late yesterday and happily got two dark circles. |
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I enjoy hanging out by myself.
I enjoy this is more natural, you don't really hang out with yourself. |
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When the sun descends, I prefer sitting on the armchair near the lake and feel the gentle breeze. When the sun descends, I prefer sitting on the armchair near the lake and feeling the gentle breeze. When the sun descends, I prefer sitting on the armchair near the lake and feeling the gentle breeze. or alternatively, "...the lake to feel the gentle breeze", if you use and you need to conjugate to feel with I as the subject. |
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It seems that the world is stationary at that moment. |
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I had a half-day off this afternoon and watched two movies during that time. |
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Two romantic movies with bad ending. Two romantic movies with bad endings. Two romantic movies with bad endings. two movies so endings should be plural, if you were going to use singular it should be "a bad ending" anyway |
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I’m not sure I prefer which, BE or HE.
I’m not sure which I prefer I guess BE and HE mean bad/happy ending but these are not at all common acronyms, I would not recommend using them. |
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But sometimes I do enjoy the feeling of crying. |
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It’s said that a musical festival will be held in our city next month, and that day is my birthday.
I It's said is actually a bit idiomatic and often used for rumors or myths, it doesn't really work here, "apparently" or "I heard" work better here. |
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Can’t wait to see my favorite band coming here. |
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That will be my first live concert experience!!! |
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